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Published online by somewhat.org
The title sums this story up perfectly. "Unique."
Like nothing I've ever read in my life. :D
Like nothing I've ever read in my life. :D
Yummy
Heh, excellent.
A clever little piece there with more than a slight undertone ranting about fastfood
Cleverly crafted and full of subtlety. The references make it stand out and the 'bitter' tone added to the delivery.
Packed with little subliminal food messages that creep into your skin and whet the appetite
Top marks
Now I could just do with a Blubberlicious Burger
Cleverly crafted and full of subtlety. The references make it stand out and the 'bitter' tone added to the delivery.
Packed with little subliminal food messages that creep into your skin and whet the appetite
Top marks
Now I could just do with a Blubberlicious Burger
That was utterly perfect.
I knew there was a reason why I held out insane love for you.
I knew there was a reason why I held out insane love for you.
Fantastic - again
Very Palahnuik in style, you read his stuff Meka? If not, please do, you'll see the paralell between his work and your own and whimple in joy.
Very nice little parody of society. Deliciously delivered.
Very nice little parody of society. Deliciously delivered.
Superb, as always.
"blubbericious"
"blubbericious"
Quality stuff - a good point well made, as one might say.
Or two, for that matter.
Or two, for that matter.
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