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Fri 06/05/05 at 18:36
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"member of dogg poun"
Posts: 787
I read this poem and its a nice thought, i thought maybe you might like it, here it is:


What Is Dying

A ship sails and I stand watching till she fades on the horizon and someone

at my side says She is gone

Gone where? Gone from my sight, that is all. She is just as large now as

when I last saw her. Her diminished size and total loss from my sight is in

me, not in her.

And just at the moment when someone at my side says she is gone there are

others who are watching her coming over their horizon and other voices take

up a glad shout There she comes!

That is what dying is. An horizon and just the limit of our sight.

Lift us up, Oh Lord, that we may see further



Bishop Brent
Fri 06/05/05 at 18:36
Regular
"member of dogg poun"
Posts: 787
I read this poem and its a nice thought, i thought maybe you might like it, here it is:


What Is Dying

A ship sails and I stand watching till she fades on the horizon and someone

at my side says She is gone

Gone where? Gone from my sight, that is all. She is just as large now as

when I last saw her. Her diminished size and total loss from my sight is in

me, not in her.

And just at the moment when someone at my side says she is gone there are

others who are watching her coming over their horizon and other voices take

up a glad shout There she comes!

That is what dying is. An horizon and just the limit of our sight.

Lift us up, Oh Lord, that we may see further



Bishop Brent
Fri 06/05/05 at 18:41
"period drama"
Posts: 19,792
Dying

I pull the cloth close,
And inhale deeply.
Fresh, new ... soon to be changed forever.

omg!
It was white, not it's green.
The mystery of my washing machine.

Please, lady, just stop crying ...
Okay, I admit it, I'm addicted to dying.
Fri 06/05/05 at 18:49
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"gsybe you!"
Posts: 18,825
I feel a slice on the edge of my artery teardrop mind
Sliced blood on a valentine cake
I hold a thorn into my corner
and weep

Death is near
because you said no
I cry to the angel
with the facepaint
and go
no no no

---

Dirge of the teen.
I bow.
Fri 06/05/05 at 18:53
"period drama"
Posts: 19,792
Wow, that was so deep.
You're amazing, Cyc.

For future reference:
Bishop Brent is a bumflap.
Fri 06/05/05 at 18:55
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"bit of a brain"
Posts: 18,933
I couldn't help but notice the obvious drug taking references. Care to expand on that?
Fri 06/05/05 at 18:57
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"gsybe you!"
Posts: 18,825
I like to think I am the best, but I also hate myself so.

It's a tough life being so pained.

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