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Mike Jumps up. Mike run’s towards Silver. Mike smacks Silver round the head. Mike runs for it though the forest. Hitting branches as he runs. Silver jumps up. Silver starts chasing after Mike. Mike still running, though the woods stops. He has come to a lake. Mike runs and dives into the lake. Swimming under the water, going as deep as he can. He hides deep under the water so that Silver might not see him. Mike can still see under the water, because the moon is bright on it. Good job Mike can hold his breath for a long time. Silver run’s though the woods to the lake. But then Mike gets an idea, maybe he could drown Silver. Mike hears a splash in the water. Silver has jumped in the water. Mike swims up to Silver and grabs him by the legs. Mike pulls Silver under the water. He watches Silver try to struggle trying to get back to the top of the water. But Silver can’t. Mike is to strong for him.
But then Silver stops he is dead. Mike swims back up to the top of the water. Pulling Silver up. Now Silver is dead. Mike can take him home and make him into a rug. All in a good days work thinks Mike the Great Hunter!
Mike Jumps up. Mike run’s towards Silver. Mike smacks Silver round the head. Mike runs for it though the forest. Hitting branches as he runs. Silver jumps up. Silver starts chasing after Mike. Mike still running, though the woods stops. He has come to a lake. Mike runs and dives into the lake. Swimming under the water, going as deep as he can. He hides deep under the water so that Silver might not see him. Mike can still see under the water, because the moon is bright on it. Good job Mike can hold his breath for a long time. Silver run’s though the woods to the lake. But then Mike gets an idea, maybe he could drown Silver. Mike hears a splash in the water. Silver has jumped in the water. Mike swims up to Silver and grabs him by the legs. Mike pulls Silver under the water. He watches Silver try to struggle trying to get back to the top of the water. But Silver can’t. Mike is to strong for him.
But then Silver stops he is dead. Mike swims back up to the top of the water. Pulling Silver up. Now Silver is dead. Mike can take him home and make him into a rug. All in a good days work thinks Mike the Great Hunter!