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"The Greatest Hunter"

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Sat 30/04/05 at 13:44
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The wolf’s eyes looked sharply at the man. The wolf drooled from his mouth. He was getting ready to jump at the man. The man had a big stick in his hand, getting ready to hit the wolf. He was going to smack the wolf with the big stick, if it did jump at him. Now your probably wondering why this wolf is about to jump at this man. Well this man is a hunter he was going to shoot the wolf, but the wolf hit the man’s rifle out his hand. The wolf hit the man’s rifle off the edge of a hill. So now it’s lost in the forest. Now let’s get back to what’s happening. The wolf is still looking madly at the man. The wolf’s claws are out and he’s getting ready to attack. Right lets just stop for a sec your probably getting annoyed of the word wolf and man now. So now the wolf’s name will be silver and the man’s name will be Mike. Now back to the story. Mike just stands there making his craziest eyes at Silver. But then Silver, pounces at Mike. Silver Scratch’s Mike round the face. Mikes face goes to the side. But then Mike grip’s the big wooden stick he has. Mike pushes Silver back. Silver fly’s though the air. Sliver Smashes to the floor.

Mike Jumps up. Mike run’s towards Silver. Mike smacks Silver round the head. Mike runs for it though the forest. Hitting branches as he runs. Silver jumps up. Silver starts chasing after Mike. Mike still running, though the woods stops. He has come to a lake. Mike runs and dives into the lake. Swimming under the water, going as deep as he can. He hides deep under the water so that Silver might not see him. Mike can still see under the water, because the moon is bright on it. Good job Mike can hold his breath for a long time. Silver run’s though the woods to the lake. But then Mike gets an idea, maybe he could drown Silver. Mike hears a splash in the water. Silver has jumped in the water. Mike swims up to Silver and grabs him by the legs. Mike pulls Silver under the water. He watches Silver try to struggle trying to get back to the top of the water. But Silver can’t. Mike is to strong for him.

But then Silver stops he is dead. Mike swims back up to the top of the water. Pulling Silver up. Now Silver is dead. Mike can take him home and make him into a rug. All in a good days work thinks Mike the Great Hunter!
Mon 02/05/05 at 19:30
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LOL I know!
Mon 02/05/05 at 19:05
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Wow, how would you explain this co-incidence!
Mon 02/05/05 at 18:13
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All different people!
Sat 30/04/05 at 18:08
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Is the Mike in this story the same as every other Mike or are they all different people that just happen to all be called Mike?
Sat 30/04/05 at 13:44
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The wolf’s eyes looked sharply at the man. The wolf drooled from his mouth. He was getting ready to jump at the man. The man had a big stick in his hand, getting ready to hit the wolf. He was going to smack the wolf with the big stick, if it did jump at him. Now your probably wondering why this wolf is about to jump at this man. Well this man is a hunter he was going to shoot the wolf, but the wolf hit the man’s rifle out his hand. The wolf hit the man’s rifle off the edge of a hill. So now it’s lost in the forest. Now let’s get back to what’s happening. The wolf is still looking madly at the man. The wolf’s claws are out and he’s getting ready to attack. Right lets just stop for a sec your probably getting annoyed of the word wolf and man now. So now the wolf’s name will be silver and the man’s name will be Mike. Now back to the story. Mike just stands there making his craziest eyes at Silver. But then Silver, pounces at Mike. Silver Scratch’s Mike round the face. Mikes face goes to the side. But then Mike grip’s the big wooden stick he has. Mike pushes Silver back. Silver fly’s though the air. Sliver Smashes to the floor.

Mike Jumps up. Mike run’s towards Silver. Mike smacks Silver round the head. Mike runs for it though the forest. Hitting branches as he runs. Silver jumps up. Silver starts chasing after Mike. Mike still running, though the woods stops. He has come to a lake. Mike runs and dives into the lake. Swimming under the water, going as deep as he can. He hides deep under the water so that Silver might not see him. Mike can still see under the water, because the moon is bright on it. Good job Mike can hold his breath for a long time. Silver run’s though the woods to the lake. But then Mike gets an idea, maybe he could drown Silver. Mike hears a splash in the water. Silver has jumped in the water. Mike swims up to Silver and grabs him by the legs. Mike pulls Silver under the water. He watches Silver try to struggle trying to get back to the top of the water. But Silver can’t. Mike is to strong for him.

But then Silver stops he is dead. Mike swims back up to the top of the water. Pulling Silver up. Now Silver is dead. Mike can take him home and make him into a rug. All in a good days work thinks Mike the Great Hunter!

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