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“It’th eathy,” he said, fat tongue hanging out of his stupid mouth, “you’ve got to thwitch the bad food, for the good. They’ll get uthed to it.”
So I bought vegetables, I bought chicken breasts to grill rather than fatty Turkey Twizzlers to stick in the deep fat fryer. No more biscuits – if they wanted desert, then it was fruit. Fruit or nothing.
Kids learn quickly. Just as I had switched the food on their plates for something healthier - for their own good, may I add - they made a switch of their own.
“We want to live with Dad,” said Thomas, the spokesman for the other two who peered out from behind him. Of course, to make the break-up easy on them we’d always said that they could live with which ever parent they wanted, so I could hardly back down now.
It’s funny, now I’m living alone I’m buying more biscuits than ever.
So I bought vegetables, I bought chicken breasts to grill rather than fatty Turkey Twizzlers to stick in the deep fat fryer. No more biscuits – if they wanted desert, then it was fruit. Fruit or nothing.
Kids learn quickly. Just as I had switched the food on their plates for something healthier - for their own good, may I add - they made a switch of their own.
“We want to live with Dad,” said Thomas, the spokesman for the other two who peered out from behind him. Of course, to make the break-up easy on them we’d always said that they could live with which ever parent they wanted, so I could hardly back down now.
It’s funny, now I’m living alone I’m buying more biscuits than ever.
Awww...
But fantastic! :-D
But fantastic! :-D
Heh. Short and sweet.
I thought it was refreshingly different, not really sure if that is technically 'a story'.
Nicely based on the theme and the originality makes it. Could've done with something like a gory twist, but was quite good without
Nicely based on the theme and the originality makes it. Could've done with something like a gory twist, but was quite good without
Wasn't too keen on it. Seemed like a diary entry or a narrative quote from a movie scene.
Sweet (and, er, short, but then it is a 'short' story competition after all!)
“It’th eathy,” he said, fat tongue hanging out of his stupid mouth, “you’ve got to thwitch the bad food, for the good. They’ll get uthed to it.”
So I bought vegetables, I bought chicken breasts to grill rather than fatty Turkey Twizzlers to stick in the deep fat fryer. No more biscuits – if they wanted desert, then it was fruit. Fruit or nothing.
Kids learn quickly. Just as I had switched the food on their plates for something healthier - for their own good, may I add - they made a switch of their own.
“We want to live with Dad,” said Thomas, the spokesman for the other two who peered out from behind him. Of course, to make the break-up easy on them we’d always said that they could live with which ever parent they wanted, so I could hardly back down now.
It’s funny, now I’m living alone I’m buying more biscuits than ever.
So I bought vegetables, I bought chicken breasts to grill rather than fatty Turkey Twizzlers to stick in the deep fat fryer. No more biscuits – if they wanted desert, then it was fruit. Fruit or nothing.
Kids learn quickly. Just as I had switched the food on their plates for something healthier - for their own good, may I add - they made a switch of their own.
“We want to live with Dad,” said Thomas, the spokesman for the other two who peered out from behind him. Of course, to make the break-up easy on them we’d always said that they could live with which ever parent they wanted, so I could hardly back down now.
It’s funny, now I’m living alone I’m buying more biscuits than ever.