The "Creative Writing" forum, which includes Retro Game Reviews, has been archived and is now read-only. You cannot post here or create a new thread or review on this forum.
I followed you home from school one day. You laughed with your chav mates all the way home. I waited, watched your mum put the bins out in the morning before going off to work.
When you stepped out the door I glassed you with the milk bottle, the pattern of red and white flowing down the gutter made an interesting contrast to the grey morning.
I broke your head on the step, it felt kind of mushy. Then I laughed and went inside to shut your brother up.
When you stepped out the door I glassed you with the milk bottle, the pattern of red and white flowing down the gutter made an interesting contrast to the grey morning.
I broke your head on the step, it felt kind of mushy. Then I laughed and went inside to shut your brother up.
Ta very much. :)
Powerful.
I followed you home from school one day. You laughed with your chav mates all the way home. I waited, watched your mum put the bins out in the morning before going off to work.
When you stepped out the door I glassed you with the milk bottle, the pattern of red and white flowing down the gutter made an interesting contrast to the grey morning.
I broke your head on the step, it felt kind of mushy. Then I laughed and went inside to shut your brother up.
When you stepped out the door I glassed you with the milk bottle, the pattern of red and white flowing down the gutter made an interesting contrast to the grey morning.
I broke your head on the step, it felt kind of mushy. Then I laughed and went inside to shut your brother up.