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Well here it is the story you asked for here it is the romance!
Her lips, his lips they close together the kiss of life, the kiss of love. They walk down the street hand in hand. There love is great ten years they have been together. They met at a party when they were fifteen. Now they are twenty five and soon to marry. Mike is so happy he is being married to Sarah. He loves her so much and will forever they said they want to be together till their old and losing most their hair. As they walk in to a restaurant. They sit down at a table and Mike looks closely in to Sarah’s eyes and Sarah looks back into his eyes. "I love you Sarah you’re so beautiful" Mike lovingly says. "I love you to Mike and always will" Nicely says Sarah back. Mike puts his hand on Sarah’s hand he whispers into her ear. "Lets get out of here and get to somewhere nicer where I can excite you" Mike slowly Whispers. They get up and walk out the restaurant Sarah holds tightly on to Mike's hand and they run down the road back to Mike’s house.
As they walk into Mike's house they run up the stair. Sarah pushes Mike to the bed and runs her hands down his body. Giving him enjoyment she unzips his trousers. She slowly puts her self on to him. Pleasure running though her body. She moves up and down as they kiss slowly she tightly grips her hands round his body. He puts his arms round her running his fingers down her back. She screams out in Pleasure he then fires it out in her and she screams so loud with Pleasure it echoes. She then lies next to him with a smile on her face. "That was great" she happily says. She closes her eyes and goes into a dream. In the dream she is walking into a room flower petals fill the floor. She walks though the petals, Petals fall to the floor, she then sees mike, he smiles and runs to her he picks her up and kisses her, then they are flying, they fly though clouds, then the dream stops.
Sarah woke to find Mike watching down on her sleeping he had a smile on his face. "You look so beautiful when you sleep" Happily said Mike with a smile on his face. Sarah just smiled back he bent down and kissed her. She got out of bed and went and looked off the balcony they had Mike came up behind her and put his arms round her kissing her neck. She looked out into the sky looking out at the clouds imagining her and Mike flying though the clouds. She turns round and gently kisses him. They close their eyes the light shines down on them from the sun. Their love is great, their love is lovely, their love is fast, and there love will never stop.
Her lips, his lips they close together the kiss of life, the kiss of love. They walk down the street hand in hand. There love is great ten years they have been together. They met at a party when they were fifteen. Now they are twenty five and soon to marry. Mike is so happy he is being married to Sarah. He loves her so much and will forever they said they want to be together till their old and losing most their hair. As they walk in to a restaurant. They sit down at a table and Mike looks closely in to Sarah’s eyes and Sarah looks back into his eyes. "I love you Sarah you’re so beautiful" Mike lovingly says. "I love you to Mike and always will" Nicely says Sarah back. Mike puts his hand on Sarah’s hand he whispers into her ear. "Lets get out of here and get to somewhere nicer where I can excite you" Mike slowly Whispers. They get up and walk out the restaurant Sarah holds tightly on to Mike's hand and they run down the road back to Mike’s house.
As they walk into Mike's house they run up the stair. Sarah pushes Mike to the bed and runs her hands down his body. Giving him enjoyment she unzips his trousers. She slowly puts her self on to him. Pleasure running though her body. She moves up and down as they kiss slowly she tightly grips her hands round his body. He puts his arms round her running his fingers down her back. She screams out in Pleasure he then fires it out in her and she screams so loud with Pleasure it echoes. She then lies next to him with a smile on her face. "That was great" she happily says. She closes her eyes and goes into a dream. In the dream she is walking into a room flower petals fill the floor. She walks though the petals, Petals fall to the floor, she then sees mike, he smiles and runs to her he picks her up and kisses her, then they are flying, they fly though clouds, then the dream stops.
Sarah woke to find Mike watching down on her sleeping he had a smile on his face. "You look so beautiful when you sleep" Happily said Mike with a smile on his face. Sarah just smiled back he bent down and kissed her. She got out of bed and went and looked off the balcony they had Mike came up behind her and put his arms round her kissing her neck. She looked out into the sky looking out at the clouds imagining her and Mike flying though the clouds. She turns round and gently kisses him. They close their eyes the light shines down on them from the sun. Their love is great, their love is lovely, their love is fast, and there love will never stop.
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Well here it is the story you asked for here it is the romance!
Her lips, his lips they close together the kiss of life, the kiss of love. They walk down the street hand in hand. There love is great ten years they have been together. They met at a party when they were fifteen. Now they are twenty five and soon to marry. Mike is so happy he is being married to Sarah. He loves her so much and will forever they said they want to be together till their old and losing most their hair. As they walk in to a restaurant. They sit down at a table and Mike looks closely in to Sarah’s eyes and Sarah looks back into his eyes. "I love you Sarah you’re so beautiful" Mike lovingly says. "I love you to Mike and always will" Nicely says Sarah back. Mike puts his hand on Sarah’s hand he whispers into her ear. "Lets get out of here and get to somewhere nicer where I can excite you" Mike slowly Whispers. They get up and walk out the restaurant Sarah holds tightly on to Mike's hand and they run down the road back to Mike’s house.
As they walk into Mike's house they run up the stair. Sarah pushes Mike to the bed and runs her hands down his body. Giving him enjoyment she unzips his trousers. She slowly puts her self on to him. Pleasure running though her body. She moves up and down as they kiss slowly she tightly grips her hands round his body. He puts his arms round her running his fingers down her back. She screams out in Pleasure he then fires it out in her and she screams so loud with Pleasure it echoes. She then lies next to him with a smile on her face. "That was great" she happily says. She closes her eyes and goes into a dream. In the dream she is walking into a room flower petals fill the floor. She walks though the petals, Petals fall to the floor, she then sees mike, he smiles and runs to her he picks her up and kisses her, then they are flying, they fly though clouds, then the dream stops.
Sarah woke to find Mike watching down on her sleeping he had a smile on his face. "You look so beautiful when you sleep" Happily said Mike with a smile on his face. Sarah just smiled back he bent down and kissed her. She got out of bed and went and looked off the balcony they had Mike came up behind her and put his arms round her kissing her neck. She looked out into the sky looking out at the clouds imagining her and Mike flying though the clouds. She turns round and gently kisses him. They close their eyes the light shines down on them from the sun. Their love is great, their love is lovely, their love is fast, and there love will never stop.
Her lips, his lips they close together the kiss of life, the kiss of love. They walk down the street hand in hand. There love is great ten years they have been together. They met at a party when they were fifteen. Now they are twenty five and soon to marry. Mike is so happy he is being married to Sarah. He loves her so much and will forever they said they want to be together till their old and losing most their hair. As they walk in to a restaurant. They sit down at a table and Mike looks closely in to Sarah’s eyes and Sarah looks back into his eyes. "I love you Sarah you’re so beautiful" Mike lovingly says. "I love you to Mike and always will" Nicely says Sarah back. Mike puts his hand on Sarah’s hand he whispers into her ear. "Lets get out of here and get to somewhere nicer where I can excite you" Mike slowly Whispers. They get up and walk out the restaurant Sarah holds tightly on to Mike's hand and they run down the road back to Mike’s house.
As they walk into Mike's house they run up the stair. Sarah pushes Mike to the bed and runs her hands down his body. Giving him enjoyment she unzips his trousers. She slowly puts her self on to him. Pleasure running though her body. She moves up and down as they kiss slowly she tightly grips her hands round his body. He puts his arms round her running his fingers down her back. She screams out in Pleasure he then fires it out in her and she screams so loud with Pleasure it echoes. She then lies next to him with a smile on her face. "That was great" she happily says. She closes her eyes and goes into a dream. In the dream she is walking into a room flower petals fill the floor. She walks though the petals, Petals fall to the floor, she then sees mike, he smiles and runs to her he picks her up and kisses her, then they are flying, they fly though clouds, then the dream stops.
Sarah woke to find Mike watching down on her sleeping he had a smile on his face. "You look so beautiful when you sleep" Happily said Mike with a smile on his face. Sarah just smiled back he bent down and kissed her. She got out of bed and went and looked off the balcony they had Mike came up behind her and put his arms round her kissing her neck. She looked out into the sky looking out at the clouds imagining her and Mike flying though the clouds. She turns round and gently kisses him. They close their eyes the light shines down on them from the sun. Their love is great, their love is lovely, their love is fast, and there love will never stop.
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C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Giving him enjoyment she unzips his trousers. She slowly puts her self on to him.
AHAHAHA!
Those two lines made me laugh out loud.
Two things.
1) How easy was she? (Rhetorical)
2) That was over really quickly. She faked it.
> Giving him enjoyment she unzips his trousers. She slowly puts her self on to him.
AHAHAHA!
Those two lines made me laugh out loud.
Two things.
1) How easy was she? (Rhetorical)
2) That was over really quickly. She faked it.
I'm happy to see it follows the usual style!
This is certainly an intriguing story.
I'm glad you focused so heavily on character development. Perhaps you could go into more detail on how you visualised the characters before offering such a staggering insight into the personalities of modern couples?
I'm glad you focused so heavily on character development. Perhaps you could go into more detail on how you visualised the characters before offering such a staggering insight into the personalities of modern couples?
English_Bloke wrote:
> 2) That was over really quickly. She faked it.
So speaks the voice of experience :D
> 2) That was over really quickly. She faked it.
So speaks the voice of experience :D
So did you like it then?
Answer my question!
Memorandum! wrote:
> This is certainly an intriguing story.
> I'm glad you focused so heavily on character development. Perhaps
> you could go into more detail on how you visualised the characters
> before offering such a staggering insight into the personalities of
> modern couples?
Alright I shall do that then soon!
> This is certainly an intriguing story.
> I'm glad you focused so heavily on character development. Perhaps
> you could go into more detail on how you visualised the characters
> before offering such a staggering insight into the personalities of
> modern couples?
Alright I shall do that then soon!
Just explain it to me now!
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