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"SSC21 - I wish i was you"

Load up on drugs and get ready for a good time. Doors: locked. Keys: hidden. Pupils: dilated.

The line begins to blur. The path. In front of my feet. Beneath. Not quite there. Cracks smooth to fuzz. Distorted like a pool. Not wet, a mirage.

Eyes. Not quite round. In groups. Two and four. Looking down. Read the white as words. Sell my friends.

Lights bathed. Like a beach. Derelict, but present. Dice rattle.

I was the devil. For a day.

I sort-of. yeah.

Liked it.

Would perhaps have been more effective if you'd written a build-up to it then had the disjoined style as the effect of the drugs.

Still managed to be good, in three words.
And as the judge, I can only praise such a short entry*

[S]*this isn't a reference to your penis. Which is amazing. Thanks

Cyclone knows, leave me alone. :(

May do a proper something. Who knows?

Very good!

Explain.

You need to be shot for this 'attempt'

:D

It's because you suck, and you're a failure mr. Koss.

In Ribber's office now.

I read this and I wasn't sure what to say.

Will there be a second attempt, Rick-fase?

I like stuff that's open to interpretation.

Yeah, wasn't really anything. Started something, went all bitty and split-up, so stopped before it just got boring.

There was a story there somewhere.

I think. :x