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"Writing style: stolen."

I looked round the room there was nobody there it was empty.What could I do who could I talk to there was a table in the middle of the room the table had a typewriter on it I looked at the typewriter. A piece of paper was in the typewriter and a big pile of pages was beside it they had writing on them I read the writing it was a story a story called Crisp Packets of Life so I decided to take the story and pretend it was my own!

James walked home from school like he did every day along the pavement. He was on his way to the shop first before he went home because he was hungry and wanted a snack before his dinner but on the way some big guys stopped in front of him there were two of them and they were big. "hey kid give me your money" boomed the first big guy "yeh kid we want your dough" thundered the second big guy but then James took his gun out of his pocket that he always brought with him just in case and shot them both in the head! James ran he ran so fast he just wanted to get away there were cars chasing him what had he done he was only protecting himself. James got to the shop he was still hungry so he bought a packet of crisps and just ran out of the shop he didn't pay he just ran. The shopkeeper ran out after him just as James went out the door he screamed madly "come back kid you have to pay" and fired at James with his shotgun.Everything went in slow-mo as James saw the bullet flying towards him he just dived out of the way just in time it was a really close call. How was James able to get out of the way of a bullet he thought to himself then he looked at the crisps he had picked up it was the crisp packet of life!

Shut up. Mine was way better than this.
The world spun around.

= >

I thought it was about suicide?

This was much better than FFF's.

I can't help but see the blatant drug references. Would you care to elaborate?

Memorandum! wrote:
> I looked round the room there was nobody there it was empty.What could
> I do who could I talk to there was a table in the middle of the room
> the table had a typewriter on it I looked at the typewriter. A piece
> of paper was in the typewriter and a big pile of pages was beside it
> they had writing on them I read the writing it was a story a story
> called Crisp Packets of Life so I decided to take the story and
> pretend it was my own!
>
> James walked home from school like he did every day along the
> pavement. He was on his way to the shop first before he went home
> because he was hungry and wanted a snack before his dinner but on the
> way some big guys stopped in front of him there were two of them and
> they were big. "hey kid give me your money" boomed the
> first big guy "yeh kid we want your dough" thundered the
> second big guy but then James took his gun out of his pocket that he
> always brought with him just in case and shot them both in the head!
> James ran he ran so fast he just wanted to get away there were cars
> chasing him what had he done he was only protecting himself. James
> got to the shop he was still hungry so he bought a packet of crisps
> and just ran out of the shop he didn't pay he just ran. The
> shopkeeper ran out after him just as James went out the door he
> screamed madly "come back kid you have to pay" and fired at
> James with his shotgun.Everything went in slow-mo as James saw the
> bullet flying towards him he just dived out of the way just in time
> it was a really close call. How was James able to get out of the way
> of a bullet he thought to himself then he looked at the crisps he had
> picked up it was the crisp packet of life!

oi feckerhed this is boring as feck

Then he turned into a beautiful butterfly.

But he was still hungry.

Very good I liked that!

I looked round the room there was nobody there it was empty.What could I do who could I talk to there was a table in the middle of the room the table had a typewriter on it I looked at the typewriter. A piece of paper was in the typewriter and a big pile of pages was beside it they had writing on them I read the writing it was a story a story called Crisp Packets of Life so I decided to take the story and pretend it was my own!

James walked home from school like he did every day along the pavement. He was on his way to the shop first before he went home because he was hungry and wanted a snack before his dinner but on the way some big guys stopped in front of him there were two of them and they were big. "hey kid give me your money" boomed the first big guy "yeh kid we want your dough" thundered the second big guy but then James took his gun out of his pocket that he always brought with him just in case and shot them both in the head! James ran he ran so fast he just wanted to get away there were cars chasing him what had he done he was only protecting himself. James got to the shop he was still hungry so he bought a packet of crisps and just ran out of the shop he didn't pay he just ran. The shopkeeper ran out after him just as James went out the door he screamed madly "come back kid you have to pay" and fired at James with his shotgun.Everything went in slow-mo as James saw the bullet flying towards him he just dived out of the way just in time it was a really close call. How was James able to get out of the way of a bullet he thought to himself then he looked at the crisps he had picked up it was the crisp packet of life!