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Death will never be great,death will never be good,death will never be good,death can never be how you want it to be. You could have a heart attack,die from cancer,be shot,be blowen up,die in a car accident,anything.
After the incident,Richard woke upon the road he didn't know why he was there. He got up from the road and walked along. His hand was cut, glass was in his legs,his head was aching and he felt so ill. No-one was on the road he just kept shouting out hello waiting for a answer but no-one still. No cars,no people,no animals,no nothing. He didn't know where his car was and he had to find it.
He walked down the road and looked around still no-one he walked on to a field near the road. He just kept calling out hello but no-one still answered. He just walked his feet crunching on the mud in the field he had to find his car and quick the night was dark and there were no stars in the sky the moon was hidden behind clouds. There were no lamp posts so Richard couldn't really see. He tripped on something and fell to the ground he looked down he had tripped over a log. He walked futher along the ground rain started pouring down from the sky. Richard started running the rain dripped though his hair he ran down a hill and ran though a field full of flowers. The flowers ran across his legs he then just dropped to the floor and lay there on his back in the flowers. As the rain dripped down on him he would just wait there till morning till it was light then he could find his car then.
That night he had strange dreams he had dreams of killing a man,a dream of being in the middle of the woods and a dream of loads of weird ceatures chasing him. He woke the next morning with the sun shining in his eyes. He jumped up and started calling out hello again maybe someone would be here now. He walked along and looked down the road still nothing,no-one,no birds,no people,no animals nothing. He walked down the road and came to a little street there were some houses. He walked over to the first house and rang the door bell of the house he rung it five times and waited there was no answer he kicked open the door and walked in. He looked around downstairs no-one he went up stairs and looked around no-one. That day he looked in every house every shop every place even the church and still there was no-one. He looked in the woods to see if he could find anything there too. But still nothing that night he slept in one of the houses.
The next day he woke with blood on his hands he went and looked in a mirror all his chest was cut he had gashes in it. What had happened to him? He walked outside on to the streets and ran for ages non-stop just searching he wasn't going to turn back. He came to a road that he had never been to before. Maybe someone would be here this time he shouted out hello so loud that people that might be in space would here him. But still no answer just a echo. For days on end he just ran and ran non-stop searching looking but he found now he just came back to the same spot everytime. He's still lost now just running searching hoping to find someone but he can't coz he is in his own world where no one else can go. Coz it is in his own time warp that no one else will go to. He is in the world of lost!
After the incident,Richard woke upon the road he didn't know why he was there. He got up from the road and walked along. His hand was cut, glass was in his legs,his head was aching and he felt so ill. No-one was on the road he just kept shouting out hello waiting for a answer but no-one still. No cars,no people,no animals,no nothing. He didn't know where his car was and he had to find it.
He walked down the road and looked around still no-one he walked on to a field near the road. He just kept calling out hello but no-one still answered. He just walked his feet crunching on the mud in the field he had to find his car and quick the night was dark and there were no stars in the sky the moon was hidden behind clouds. There were no lamp posts so Richard couldn't really see. He tripped on something and fell to the ground he looked down he had tripped over a log. He walked futher along the ground rain started pouring down from the sky. Richard started running the rain dripped though his hair he ran down a hill and ran though a field full of flowers. The flowers ran across his legs he then just dropped to the floor and lay there on his back in the flowers. As the rain dripped down on him he would just wait there till morning till it was light then he could find his car then.
That night he had strange dreams he had dreams of killing a man,a dream of being in the middle of the woods and a dream of loads of weird ceatures chasing him. He woke the next morning with the sun shining in his eyes. He jumped up and started calling out hello again maybe someone would be here now. He walked along and looked down the road still nothing,no-one,no birds,no people,no animals nothing. He walked down the road and came to a little street there were some houses. He walked over to the first house and rang the door bell of the house he rung it five times and waited there was no answer he kicked open the door and walked in. He looked around downstairs no-one he went up stairs and looked around no-one. That day he looked in every house every shop every place even the church and still there was no-one. He looked in the woods to see if he could find anything there too. But still nothing that night he slept in one of the houses.
The next day he woke with blood on his hands he went and looked in a mirror all his chest was cut he had gashes in it. What had happened to him? He walked outside on to the streets and ran for ages non-stop just searching he wasn't going to turn back. He came to a road that he had never been to before. Maybe someone would be here this time he shouted out hello so loud that people that might be in space would here him. But still no answer just a echo. For days on end he just ran and ran non-stop searching looking but he found now he just came back to the same spot everytime. He's still lost now just running searching hoping to find someone but he can't coz he is in his own world where no one else can go. Coz it is in his own time warp that no one else will go to. He is in the world of lost!
Has anyone read it yet?
The story is done happy now!
Disappointing considering this was a landmark post for you.
Your mum has come home so you need to get off.......oh.
Horrible images...horrible...AAAARGH!!!!
Horrible images...horrible...AAAARGH!!!!
Never show a work in progress, bob.
Death will never be great,death will never be good,death will never be good,death can never be how you want it to be. You could have a heart attack,die from cancer,be shot,be blowen up,die in a car accident,anything.
After the incident,Richard woke upon the road he didn't know why he was there. He got up from the road and walked along. His hand was cut, glass was in his legs,his head was aching and he felt so ill. No-one was on the road he just kept shouting out hello waiting for a answer but no-one still. No cars,no people,no animals,no nothing. He didn't know where his car was and he had to find it.
He walked down the road and looked around still no-one he walked on to a field near the road. He just kept calling out hello but no-one still answered. He just walked his feet crunching on the mud in the field he had to find his car and quick the night was dark and there were no stars in the sky the moon was hidden behind clouds. There were no lamp posts so Richard couldn't really see. He tripped on something and fell to the ground he looked down he had tripped over a log. He walked futher along the ground rain started pouring down from the sky. Richard started running the rain dripped though his hair he ran down a hill and ran though a field full of flowers. The flowers ran across his legs he then just dropped to the floor and lay there on his back in the flowers. As the rain dripped down on him he would just wait there till morning till it was light then he could find his car then.
That night he had strange dreams he had dreams of killing a man,a dream of being in the middle of the woods and a dream of loads of weird ceatures chasing him. He woke the next morning with the sun shining in his eyes. He jumped up and started calling out hello again maybe someone would be here now. He walked along and looked down the road still nothing,no-one,no birds,no people,no animals nothing. He walked down the road and came to a little street there were some houses. He walked over to the first house and rang the door bell of the house he rung it five times and waited there was no answer he kicked open the door and walked in. He looked around downstairs no-one he went up stairs and looked around no-one. That day he looked in every house every shop every place even the church and still there was no-one. He looked in the woods to see if he could find anything there too. But still nothing that night he slept in one of the houses.
The next day he woke with blood on his hands he went and looked in a mirror all his chest was cut he had gashes in it. What had happened to him? He walked outside on to the streets and ran for ages non-stop just searching he wasn't going to turn back. He came to a road that he had never been to before. Maybe someone would be here this time he shouted out hello so loud that people that might be in space would here him. But still no answer just a echo. For days on end he just ran and ran non-stop searching looking but he found now he just came back to the same spot everytime. He's still lost now just running searching hoping to find someone but he can't coz he is in his own world where no one else can go. Coz it is in his own time warp that no one else will go to. He is in the world of lost!
After the incident,Richard woke upon the road he didn't know why he was there. He got up from the road and walked along. His hand was cut, glass was in his legs,his head was aching and he felt so ill. No-one was on the road he just kept shouting out hello waiting for a answer but no-one still. No cars,no people,no animals,no nothing. He didn't know where his car was and he had to find it.
He walked down the road and looked around still no-one he walked on to a field near the road. He just kept calling out hello but no-one still answered. He just walked his feet crunching on the mud in the field he had to find his car and quick the night was dark and there were no stars in the sky the moon was hidden behind clouds. There were no lamp posts so Richard couldn't really see. He tripped on something and fell to the ground he looked down he had tripped over a log. He walked futher along the ground rain started pouring down from the sky. Richard started running the rain dripped though his hair he ran down a hill and ran though a field full of flowers. The flowers ran across his legs he then just dropped to the floor and lay there on his back in the flowers. As the rain dripped down on him he would just wait there till morning till it was light then he could find his car then.
That night he had strange dreams he had dreams of killing a man,a dream of being in the middle of the woods and a dream of loads of weird ceatures chasing him. He woke the next morning with the sun shining in his eyes. He jumped up and started calling out hello again maybe someone would be here now. He walked along and looked down the road still nothing,no-one,no birds,no people,no animals nothing. He walked down the road and came to a little street there were some houses. He walked over to the first house and rang the door bell of the house he rung it five times and waited there was no answer he kicked open the door and walked in. He looked around downstairs no-one he went up stairs and looked around no-one. That day he looked in every house every shop every place even the church and still there was no-one. He looked in the woods to see if he could find anything there too. But still nothing that night he slept in one of the houses.
The next day he woke with blood on his hands he went and looked in a mirror all his chest was cut he had gashes in it. What had happened to him? He walked outside on to the streets and ran for ages non-stop just searching he wasn't going to turn back. He came to a road that he had never been to before. Maybe someone would be here this time he shouted out hello so loud that people that might be in space would here him. But still no answer just a echo. For days on end he just ran and ran non-stop searching looking but he found now he just came back to the same spot everytime. He's still lost now just running searching hoping to find someone but he can't coz he is in his own world where no one else can go. Coz it is in his own time warp that no one else will go to. He is in the world of lost!