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Just found it.
Theiving, deceiving, my hearts bleeding that you're leaving, greaving but seeing that being dishonest carries no meaning, screaming yet feeling that needing you is unneeded, warnings weren't heeded, being conceited and ignoring warnings bleated about where you leaded, unkindly blinding you led me and left me down a winding path, finding i was lost while you were hiding before deciding that guiding me further into the dark was amusing, all the while i'm losing by choosing to follow your confusing game of hide and seek, feeling weak, i know i'm on a losing streak
Theiving, deceiving, my hearts bleeding that you're leaving, greaving but seeing that being dishonest carries no meaning, screaming yet feeling that needing you is unneeded, warnings weren't heeded, being conceited and ignoring warnings bleated about where you leaded, unkindly blinding you led me and left me down a winding path, finding i was lost while you were hiding before deciding that guiding me further into the dark was amusing, all the while i'm losing by choosing to follow your confusing game of hide and seek, feeling weak, i know i'm on a losing streak
Not bad. Sounds like lyrics to a rap.
that seems to me a tongue twister. Is it so?
crossbob wrote:
> Very Good!
Such condemnation i was not prepared for, i now know it's awful. :)
> Very Good!
Such condemnation i was not prepared for, i now know it's awful. :)
Very Good!
Just found it.
Theiving, deceiving, my hearts bleeding that you're leaving, greaving but seeing that being dishonest carries no meaning, screaming yet feeling that needing you is unneeded, warnings weren't heeded, being conceited and ignoring warnings bleated about where you leaded, unkindly blinding you led me and left me down a winding path, finding i was lost while you were hiding before deciding that guiding me further into the dark was amusing, all the while i'm losing by choosing to follow your confusing game of hide and seek, feeling weak, i know i'm on a losing streak
Theiving, deceiving, my hearts bleeding that you're leaving, greaving but seeing that being dishonest carries no meaning, screaming yet feeling that needing you is unneeded, warnings weren't heeded, being conceited and ignoring warnings bleated about where you leaded, unkindly blinding you led me and left me down a winding path, finding i was lost while you were hiding before deciding that guiding me further into the dark was amusing, all the while i'm losing by choosing to follow your confusing game of hide and seek, feeling weak, i know i'm on a losing streak