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"Was it not yesterday we spoke about the killing" asked the man. "Yes it was Master we have now killed him I just thought I should tell" answered the other man. As the stood in the alleyway Police were watching from all sides they were after this man who had just killed someone. A Sniper lay on top of a building aiming at the man. The other man who was talking to him ran away this man who was running away was actually undercover and they had been looking for this man for ages. He had killed so many people he was first called the Horse Shoe Murderer because he would kill smash people over the head with a horse shoe! But now he was the Break Neck Murderer he would kill people by breaking there necks. As he still stood down the alleyway waiting to leave he was waiting for someone to pick him up in a car. He lit a cigarette a puffed away on it a car was pulling up the Sniper got ready. The man ran over to the car and got in. The Sniper shot the bullet flew though the air and smashed the though the window of the car. Cops started shooting at the car. But it sped off down the road “we need a helicopter and quick highway pursuit the Break Neck Murderer is getting away quick” called one of the Police officers though his walkie talkie. As the car sped down the road the Break Neck Murder loaded up a gun he had next to him in the car.
A Police car pulled up at the side the Break Necked Murderer shot though the broken window. The Police car skidded out of the way the Break Neck Murderers car sped forwards more they were getting away a Police Helicopter flew over the top of them but they were still getting away the Police Helicopter started shooting at the car. It swerved left and right missing some of the bullets. The skidded down an alleyway smashing into cardboard boxes as it went. The car boxes flew though the air hitting into the Police car behind the Break Neck Murderers car. The Break Neck Murderers car skidded back on to the road. The Break Neck Murderer put his head back out the window and shot back at the Police again he smashed the windscreen the bullet hit the drive. The Police car skidded left, right and smashed into a wall the other Police Man in the passenger seat got out. He tried to shoot at the BNM car but got shot and went fly backwards and smashed to the ground as the car still drove off police kept on coming from everywhere. The BNM was still getting away. The Police had to do a road-block and stop the BNM the car flew down the road and drove on to some grass the helicopter was losing it. But the Helicopter was to low down and was flying towards a shop it tried to pull up but smashed into the building now the BNM could get away. He skidded under a bridge and stopped there it was the railway tracks. The BNM got out the car and the man that was driving it got out too. As they hid under the bridge they could hear a train coming.
They ran to the sides of the tunnel the car they had parked there was smashed into bits as the train flew into it. All of a sudden they train started to slow do the BNM was going to nick the train. The train driver got out of the train the BNM walked slowly up to him grabbed hold of the train drivers head and snapped it sideways the bones smashed into bits and his neck snapped in half too. The BNM jumped on the train and started it up the other man jumped in too. As the train sped off down the track Police cars sped in front of it. But the BNM just smashed the train into the police cars but then he stopped the train quickly and jumped down a grenade flew though the front of the train smashing though the window. It landed on the ground the BNM tried to run the other man ran too. The BNM got away but the other man didn’t the grenade blew up when he was standing there he went flying though the air and smashed to the ground. His head smashed to the ground and his arm went flying off blood squeaked out of his arm. His arms went back into his head and he was dead. The BNM ran down the train the police were jumping into the train. Passengers looked at the BNM and got worried looks on there faces. But one wasn’t to scared he jumped at the BNM and tried to smack him round the face. But then the BNM murderer grabbed hold of him flipped him over and smashed him to the floor breaking his neck. The BNM ran down the train but then all of a sudden a bullet flew past him and smashed a window in front of him someone was trying to shoot at him. The BNM flipped backwards a load of times and landed at the man behind he span the man round smashed his head against the wall a load of time and killed him straight away but breaking his neck first. The BNM walked slowly do the train but then someone grabbed hold of him the BNM tried to grab hold of the person. But the BNM was chucked though the air he smashed into a wall then he saw the person he had grabbed hold of him it was Sabot theta he was the only one that could kill the BNM he had the powers to kill him but just using his hand and jolting something in his brain. The BNM dodged past his hand so he didn’t get killed he tried to grab hold of the Sabot again. But Sabot jumped out the way and grabbed hold of the BNM. He smashed the BNM head against the wall the blood started dripping from his head.
The BNM tried to jumped away from Sabot but Sabot was about to get the points in his brain. The BNM tried to rip off again but he was about to die. The Points were Jolted he started shaking pain ran though his body, blood dripped from his eyes, his bones broken so many times you couldn’t count, His teeth dropped out, so many bad things were happening to him. Him dropped to the floor his eyelids closed and his heart stopped the BNM was dead and couldn’t break necks anymore. Now there was a new murderer the Five Finger Murderer because he killed people by Jolting there brain with five fingers and the Five Finger Murderer was Sabot!
A Police car pulled up at the side the Break Necked Murderer shot though the broken window. The Police car skidded out of the way the Break Neck Murderers car sped forwards more they were getting away a Police Helicopter flew over the top of them but they were still getting away the Police Helicopter started shooting at the car. It swerved left and right missing some of the bullets. The skidded down an alleyway smashing into cardboard boxes as it went. The car boxes flew though the air hitting into the Police car behind the Break Neck Murderers car. The Break Neck Murderers car skidded back on to the road. The Break Neck Murderer put his head back out the window and shot back at the Police again he smashed the windscreen the bullet hit the drive. The Police car skidded left, right and smashed into a wall the other Police Man in the passenger seat got out. He tried to shoot at the BNM car but got shot and went fly backwards and smashed to the ground as the car still drove off police kept on coming from everywhere. The BNM was still getting away. The Police had to do a road-block and stop the BNM the car flew down the road and drove on to some grass the helicopter was losing it. But the Helicopter was to low down and was flying towards a shop it tried to pull up but smashed into the building now the BNM could get away. He skidded under a bridge and stopped there it was the railway tracks. The BNM got out the car and the man that was driving it got out too. As they hid under the bridge they could hear a train coming.
They ran to the sides of the tunnel the car they had parked there was smashed into bits as the train flew into it. All of a sudden they train started to slow do the BNM was going to nick the train. The train driver got out of the train the BNM walked slowly up to him grabbed hold of the train drivers head and snapped it sideways the bones smashed into bits and his neck snapped in half too. The BNM jumped on the train and started it up the other man jumped in too. As the train sped off down the track Police cars sped in front of it. But the BNM just smashed the train into the police cars but then he stopped the train quickly and jumped down a grenade flew though the front of the train smashing though the window. It landed on the ground the BNM tried to run the other man ran too. The BNM got away but the other man didn’t the grenade blew up when he was standing there he went flying though the air and smashed to the ground. His head smashed to the ground and his arm went flying off blood squeaked out of his arm. His arms went back into his head and he was dead. The BNM ran down the train the police were jumping into the train. Passengers looked at the BNM and got worried looks on there faces. But one wasn’t to scared he jumped at the BNM and tried to smack him round the face. But then the BNM murderer grabbed hold of him flipped him over and smashed him to the floor breaking his neck. The BNM ran down the train but then all of a sudden a bullet flew past him and smashed a window in front of him someone was trying to shoot at him. The BNM flipped backwards a load of times and landed at the man behind he span the man round smashed his head against the wall a load of time and killed him straight away but breaking his neck first. The BNM walked slowly do the train but then someone grabbed hold of him the BNM tried to grab hold of the person. But the BNM was chucked though the air he smashed into a wall then he saw the person he had grabbed hold of him it was Sabot theta he was the only one that could kill the BNM he had the powers to kill him but just using his hand and jolting something in his brain. The BNM dodged past his hand so he didn’t get killed he tried to grab hold of the Sabot again. But Sabot jumped out the way and grabbed hold of the BNM. He smashed the BNM head against the wall the blood started dripping from his head.
The BNM tried to jumped away from Sabot but Sabot was about to get the points in his brain. The BNM tried to rip off again but he was about to die. The Points were Jolted he started shaking pain ran though his body, blood dripped from his eyes, his bones broken so many times you couldn’t count, His teeth dropped out, so many bad things were happening to him. Him dropped to the floor his eyelids closed and his heart stopped the BNM was dead and couldn’t break necks anymore. Now there was a new murderer the Five Finger Murderer because he killed people by Jolting there brain with five fingers and the Five Finger Murderer was Sabot!
LOL good for you!
I like violence.
It was Sabot everyone.
thank you very much my friend tom said that too! how are you then?
Aww ... I'm sorry.
But no-one is reading this. I can't help that.
Although, I must say, this story shows some degree of improvement over previous attempts.
But no-one is reading this. I can't help that.
Although, I must say, this story shows some degree of improvement over previous attempts.
Stop being horrible to me FFF cause I like you and think your cool so leave me alone please!
No they aren't!
Is anybody reading this!
"Was it not yesterday we spoke about the killing" asked the man. "Yes it was Master we have now killed him I just thought I should tell" answered the other man. As the stood in the alleyway Police were watching from all sides they were after this man who had just killed someone. A Sniper lay on top of a building aiming at the man. The other man who was talking to him ran away this man who was running away was actually undercover and they had been looking for this man for ages. He had killed so many people he was first called the Horse Shoe Murderer because he would kill smash people over the head with a horse shoe! But now he was the Break Neck Murderer he would kill people by breaking there necks. As he still stood down the alleyway waiting to leave he was waiting for someone to pick him up in a car. He lit a cigarette a puffed away on it a car was pulling up the Sniper got ready. The man ran over to the car and got in. The Sniper shot the bullet flew though the air and smashed the though the window of the car. Cops started shooting at the car. But it sped off down the road “we need a helicopter and quick highway pursuit the Break Neck Murderer is getting away quick” called one of the Police officers though his walkie talkie. As the car sped down the road the Break Neck Murder loaded up a gun he had next to him in the car.
A Police car pulled up at the side the Break Necked Murderer shot though the broken window. The Police car skidded out of the way the Break Neck Murderers car sped forwards more they were getting away a Police Helicopter flew over the top of them but they were still getting away the Police Helicopter started shooting at the car. It swerved left and right missing some of the bullets. The skidded down an alleyway smashing into cardboard boxes as it went. The car boxes flew though the air hitting into the Police car behind the Break Neck Murderers car. The Break Neck Murderers car skidded back on to the road. The Break Neck Murderer put his head back out the window and shot back at the Police again he smashed the windscreen the bullet hit the drive. The Police car skidded left, right and smashed into a wall the other Police Man in the passenger seat got out. He tried to shoot at the BNM car but got shot and went fly backwards and smashed to the ground as the car still drove off police kept on coming from everywhere. The BNM was still getting away. The Police had to do a road-block and stop the BNM the car flew down the road and drove on to some grass the helicopter was losing it. But the Helicopter was to low down and was flying towards a shop it tried to pull up but smashed into the building now the BNM could get away. He skidded under a bridge and stopped there it was the railway tracks. The BNM got out the car and the man that was driving it got out too. As they hid under the bridge they could hear a train coming.
They ran to the sides of the tunnel the car they had parked there was smashed into bits as the train flew into it. All of a sudden they train started to slow do the BNM was going to nick the train. The train driver got out of the train the BNM walked slowly up to him grabbed hold of the train drivers head and snapped it sideways the bones smashed into bits and his neck snapped in half too. The BNM jumped on the train and started it up the other man jumped in too. As the train sped off down the track Police cars sped in front of it. But the BNM just smashed the train into the police cars but then he stopped the train quickly and jumped down a grenade flew though the front of the train smashing though the window. It landed on the ground the BNM tried to run the other man ran too. The BNM got away but the other man didn’t the grenade blew up when he was standing there he went flying though the air and smashed to the ground. His head smashed to the ground and his arm went flying off blood squeaked out of his arm. His arms went back into his head and he was dead. The BNM ran down the train the police were jumping into the train. Passengers looked at the BNM and got worried looks on there faces. But one wasn’t to scared he jumped at the BNM and tried to smack him round the face. But then the BNM murderer grabbed hold of him flipped him over and smashed him to the floor breaking his neck. The BNM ran down the train but then all of a sudden a bullet flew past him and smashed a window in front of him someone was trying to shoot at him. The BNM flipped backwards a load of times and landed at the man behind he span the man round smashed his head against the wall a load of time and killed him straight away but breaking his neck first. The BNM walked slowly do the train but then someone grabbed hold of him the BNM tried to grab hold of the person. But the BNM was chucked though the air he smashed into a wall then he saw the person he had grabbed hold of him it was Sabot theta he was the only one that could kill the BNM he had the powers to kill him but just using his hand and jolting something in his brain. The BNM dodged past his hand so he didn’t get killed he tried to grab hold of the Sabot again. But Sabot jumped out the way and grabbed hold of the BNM. He smashed the BNM head against the wall the blood started dripping from his head.
The BNM tried to jumped away from Sabot but Sabot was about to get the points in his brain. The BNM tried to rip off again but he was about to die. The Points were Jolted he started shaking pain ran though his body, blood dripped from his eyes, his bones broken so many times you couldn’t count, His teeth dropped out, so many bad things were happening to him. Him dropped to the floor his eyelids closed and his heart stopped the BNM was dead and couldn’t break necks anymore. Now there was a new murderer the Five Finger Murderer because he killed people by Jolting there brain with five fingers and the Five Finger Murderer was Sabot!
A Police car pulled up at the side the Break Necked Murderer shot though the broken window. The Police car skidded out of the way the Break Neck Murderers car sped forwards more they were getting away a Police Helicopter flew over the top of them but they were still getting away the Police Helicopter started shooting at the car. It swerved left and right missing some of the bullets. The skidded down an alleyway smashing into cardboard boxes as it went. The car boxes flew though the air hitting into the Police car behind the Break Neck Murderers car. The Break Neck Murderers car skidded back on to the road. The Break Neck Murderer put his head back out the window and shot back at the Police again he smashed the windscreen the bullet hit the drive. The Police car skidded left, right and smashed into a wall the other Police Man in the passenger seat got out. He tried to shoot at the BNM car but got shot and went fly backwards and smashed to the ground as the car still drove off police kept on coming from everywhere. The BNM was still getting away. The Police had to do a road-block and stop the BNM the car flew down the road and drove on to some grass the helicopter was losing it. But the Helicopter was to low down and was flying towards a shop it tried to pull up but smashed into the building now the BNM could get away. He skidded under a bridge and stopped there it was the railway tracks. The BNM got out the car and the man that was driving it got out too. As they hid under the bridge they could hear a train coming.
They ran to the sides of the tunnel the car they had parked there was smashed into bits as the train flew into it. All of a sudden they train started to slow do the BNM was going to nick the train. The train driver got out of the train the BNM walked slowly up to him grabbed hold of the train drivers head and snapped it sideways the bones smashed into bits and his neck snapped in half too. The BNM jumped on the train and started it up the other man jumped in too. As the train sped off down the track Police cars sped in front of it. But the BNM just smashed the train into the police cars but then he stopped the train quickly and jumped down a grenade flew though the front of the train smashing though the window. It landed on the ground the BNM tried to run the other man ran too. The BNM got away but the other man didn’t the grenade blew up when he was standing there he went flying though the air and smashed to the ground. His head smashed to the ground and his arm went flying off blood squeaked out of his arm. His arms went back into his head and he was dead. The BNM ran down the train the police were jumping into the train. Passengers looked at the BNM and got worried looks on there faces. But one wasn’t to scared he jumped at the BNM and tried to smack him round the face. But then the BNM murderer grabbed hold of him flipped him over and smashed him to the floor breaking his neck. The BNM ran down the train but then all of a sudden a bullet flew past him and smashed a window in front of him someone was trying to shoot at him. The BNM flipped backwards a load of times and landed at the man behind he span the man round smashed his head against the wall a load of time and killed him straight away but breaking his neck first. The BNM walked slowly do the train but then someone grabbed hold of him the BNM tried to grab hold of the person. But the BNM was chucked though the air he smashed into a wall then he saw the person he had grabbed hold of him it was Sabot theta he was the only one that could kill the BNM he had the powers to kill him but just using his hand and jolting something in his brain. The BNM dodged past his hand so he didn’t get killed he tried to grab hold of the Sabot again. But Sabot jumped out the way and grabbed hold of the BNM. He smashed the BNM head against the wall the blood started dripping from his head.
The BNM tried to jumped away from Sabot but Sabot was about to get the points in his brain. The BNM tried to rip off again but he was about to die. The Points were Jolted he started shaking pain ran though his body, blood dripped from his eyes, his bones broken so many times you couldn’t count, His teeth dropped out, so many bad things were happening to him. Him dropped to the floor his eyelids closed and his heart stopped the BNM was dead and couldn’t break necks anymore. Now there was a new murderer the Five Finger Murderer because he killed people by Jolting there brain with five fingers and the Five Finger Murderer was Sabot!