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I never thought that this day would be my last but a big part of me was glad, why I even wanted to climb this beast is beyond me but I knew everyone down at the summit would of given up now. Somehow I thought it would be easier than this I trained for months and months and I had the strength for it but something that I never contemplated was the mental will I would need for something like this. Sometimes I would look down a cliff edge and just wonder is life worth living anymore? I could just stand there for hours running it through my head never getting a final decision through my weak brain. But now it wasn’t down to me, luck was now the decider of my fate and from past experience it was never on my side. 2 hours into my conversation with rag boy the tent when the above glacier crumbled under the weight collapsing onto what I thought was my “safe place” suddenly turned into my doom. I was in hell and had just met the devil his faced appeared as a thousand falling diamonds cutting my skin as they hit the floor a day later I lay here waiting for something whether it be death or my saviour I just lay here.
“Save me”
I never thought that this day would be my last but a big part of me was glad, why I even wanted to climb this beast is beyond me but I knew everyone down at the summit would of given up now. Somehow I thought it would be easier than this I trained for months and months and I had the strength for it but something that I never contemplated was the mental will I would need for something like this. Sometimes I would look down a cliff edge and just wonder is life worth living anymore? I could just stand there for hours running it through my head never getting a final decision through my weak brain. But now it wasn’t down to me, luck was now the decider of my fate and from past experience it was never on my side. 2 hours into my conversation with rag boy the tent when the above glacier crumbled under the weight collapsing onto what I thought was my “safe place” suddenly turned into my doom. I was in hell and had just met the devil his faced appeared as a thousand falling diamonds cutting my skin as they hit the floor a day later I lay here waiting for something whether it be death or my saviour I just lay here.
“Save me”
Mistake here too:
“This will have to do I thought”
And, "better than your other one"? Are you a previous regular?