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Mon 03/01/05 at 03:18
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"Bring the beat back"
Posts: 1,804
I said I didn’t want to go
But they made me board the plane
I landed at the airport
I feel scared; I’m going in sane

I’m in the city centre
It’s too crowded here for me
I’ll run and hide for cover
But who will shelter me?

What is there to eat?
I’m hungry and need a drink
No one can understand me
Oh, why can’t I think?

I see children playing football
I try to join their game
They look at me and stare
We just don’t look the same

There are lots of people talking
But I don’t know what they say
I become confused and frightened
It makes me want to run away

I wish my friends were with me
And I miss my Mum and Dad
It’s getting cold and dark
I’m feeling very sad

Where will I spend the night?
I want to close my eyes and sleep
But don’t know if I will be safe
I try to be brave but want to weep

Why did they make me come here?
I should have run away
Why did I let them bring me?
On that cold and dismal day


That was done when I was young and I only just found it so I thought I would share it with all you lucky people that read it. Yeah right, sorry if you feel it was a waste of time but I did try to make a decent poem, even if its no good at least I tried.
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Mon 03/01/05 at 03:18
Regular
"Bring the beat back"
Posts: 1,804
I said I didn’t want to go
But they made me board the plane
I landed at the airport
I feel scared; I’m going in sane

I’m in the city centre
It’s too crowded here for me
I’ll run and hide for cover
But who will shelter me?

What is there to eat?
I’m hungry and need a drink
No one can understand me
Oh, why can’t I think?

I see children playing football
I try to join their game
They look at me and stare
We just don’t look the same

There are lots of people talking
But I don’t know what they say
I become confused and frightened
It makes me want to run away

I wish my friends were with me
And I miss my Mum and Dad
It’s getting cold and dark
I’m feeling very sad

Where will I spend the night?
I want to close my eyes and sleep
But don’t know if I will be safe
I try to be brave but want to weep

Why did they make me come here?
I should have run away
Why did I let them bring me?
On that cold and dismal day


That was done when I was young and I only just found it so I thought I would share it with all you lucky people that read it. Yeah right, sorry if you feel it was a waste of time but I did try to make a decent poem, even if its no good at least I tried.

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