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You all know my 'poems'.
I call this The Crow Man:
Watch out for the crow man
He walks and creeps
Watch out for his long brown hair
As he scrambles across the trees
He's as old as the night
Unseen
He remains immortal
Untouched
He remains invinsible
Call his name
He'll hunt you down
Call him names
He'll eat you up
The crow man waits
The snow man waits
I call this The Crow Man:
Watch out for the crow man
He walks and creeps
Watch out for his long brown hair
As he scrambles across the trees
He's as old as the night
Unseen
He remains immortal
Untouched
He remains invinsible
Call his name
He'll hunt you down
Call him names
He'll eat you up
The crow man waits
The snow man waits
You all know my 'poems'.
I call this The Crow Man:
Watch out for the crow man
He walks and creeps
Watch out for his long brown hair
As he scrambles across the trees
He's as old as the night
Unseen
He remains immortal
Untouched
He remains invinsible
Call his name
He'll hunt you down
Call him names
He'll eat you up
The crow man waits
The snow man waits
I call this The Crow Man:
Watch out for the crow man
He walks and creeps
Watch out for his long brown hair
As he scrambles across the trees
He's as old as the night
Unseen
He remains immortal
Untouched
He remains invinsible
Call his name
He'll hunt you down
Call him names
He'll eat you up
The crow man waits
The snow man waits
kinda poor.
"kinda"
Who said it was meant to be good.
Hmmmm...There's a fine line between meaningful, surreal and original, and ridiculous. I think...this...is...just on the wrong side.
You're almost there though.
You're almost there though.