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She hadn't meant to do it, or had she, either way, she had. Injected herself with the spawn of some MAN unknown, too many to guess. 'You don't HAVE to sleep with so many MEN' her mother exclaimed, unannounced to the fact she was a victim of rapists. 'How do you know how I am feeling' Sabrina retorts, snarling. 'If you knew what I knew about your brothers, then it is time we took you to the vicar' mother said, gently, but with an anger. But had the vicar known what had occured those 5 days before? Either way Sabrina had to make a decision. 'Will I keep the baby, or not' she asks to herself. Without further thought, she turns up to the vicar.
'Yes, this time' she mumbles
She sprawls her guts upon the floor, and with it, a child. The child of a rapist.
'Yes, this time' she mumbles
She sprawls her guts upon the floor, and with it, a child. The child of a rapist.
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Domaye wrote:
> how the hell can you ask a banned person why they were banned?
psst . . . small_trouser78 is jim-hat.
Come on though, it even says it in his tag line.
> how the hell can you ask a banned person why they were banned?
psst . . . small_trouser78 is jim-hat.
Come on though, it even says it in his tag line.
ahahahahaha
how the hell can you ask a banned person why they were banned?
Nice serve, jim-hat. Why were you banned mate?
This piece drew me in, just because of it's total dysfunctional content. Intriguing. Especially the visuals. Why anyone would want you to continue is beyond me. I think you ended it perfectly enough to put spin in your mind as to the psychosis this child (the one who gave birth) endured. I think it's simply blatent horror and presented as it should be...short, to the point, and in your face. Nice serve.
Wow, this is really really good!!!
:-D
Jim-hat strikes again.
Please write more.
Ahahah
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