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"Does this make relative sense?"

(...stoatfase)

It sounds awkward.
Gah.

Well, okay.
I suppose that does make relative sense now.

There - all has been put right.

FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> It's fine as it is.

Upon seeing the joy of "stoatfase", I now beg to differ.

Nonono.
Excuse me. I know nothing.

...

Why did I write that?
It's fine as it is.

Just the 'of' sounds funny.
Would 'in' make any more sense? Because it sounds better.

But if we're just going on sounds, I'd put something like stoatfase or jimglejannygel

Well it's fine.

I might ask you a favour of the same caliber of this sentence:

Permanence is an illusion created by mortgage providers and animal rights spokespeople, nothing really lasts forever, it rarely lasts a lifetime. Except a lifetime, which inevitably lasts a lifetime.

yarr
I suppose you'd have to see it in the context it's used in, but I'm not doing that - oh no.

it made pretty much sense to me, it's just a lot of clauses in a fairly short sentence.

It's grammatically sound, it just reads slightly funny.

No.

Ahahar.

Screw it, it'll do.
It makes sense enough.

(...relatively anonymous, due to her circumvention of the business, in its entirety)

any better?