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Tue 07/12/04 at 22:44
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I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you all that this forum name should be entitled 'Creative Typing'.

The following is a story I formulated in my head and transferred to this screen via a computer and keyboard.

Brian was a man's name and, coincidentally, was a man. He had gotten into his bed the night before and slept. He then awoke in the morning, which is what he wanted to do. After doing everything that is necessary to avoid getting laughed at, looked at and arrested, he left the house because the house was giving him the silent treatment.

Whilst walking on the path in the direction of the place where he earns money in exchange for him doing certain tasks during the hours of 9am until 5pm, he bumps into someone. He apologises and this someone happens to be Fred, who is also a man, a man's name and his friend from when they used to school.

They don't go to school anymore because at a certain age stipulated by the government, they had to sit down on chairs in front of tables with paper on them in a hall multiple times over a period of many days. On the paper was typed questions, which was done beforehand, and they had to answer these questions by writing with a pen or pencil. After a certain length of time that was predetermined, they had to stop answering the questions.

After many months, the answers that they had written were checked to see how many they got correct. The total of the correct answers was then transferred into a letter and put on a certificate that was given to them. After they received their many certificates, they had to make a decision as to whether they would go and learn more in a educational facility environment or to seek employment where they perform certain tasks set by someone in exchange for money. Both Brian and Fred chose to perform these tasks.

Brian had more letters close to the start of the alphabet on his certificates than Fred, so apparently that gives Brian the option to perform less tasks for more money.

Brian and Fred begin to converse using words spoken out of their mouths about certain incidents that they remembered when they went to school. After two hours had past, unnoticed and silently, Brian looked at his watch, which is a means to tell what time of the day it was, and realised that he was meant to be performing tasks for money instead of talking to Fred.

Brian says, using words spoken out of his mouth, that he is meant to be performing tasks for money and then runs to the place where he performs those tasks. He enters the building via the door in the wall, which allows access to the interior of the structure. The person who designates the tasks that Brian has to perform says using words spoken that he did not enter the building via the door in the wall at the correct time. Brian apologised and entered a room via a door in an interior wall. Brian went on to perform many tasks during the day.

Brian then exited the room, and then the building, and walked on the path in the direction of his house. He had forgiven the house for being silent, as he went straight into it's interior rooms via the door in the wall of the house. After doing a lot more necessary things, Brian started yawning and having trouble keeping his eyelids from covering his eyes for long periods of time so, after removing his clothes in a certain way and putting on different clothing, he got onto his bed and pulled the duvet cover over him and closed his eyelids.
Wed 08/12/04 at 01:40
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oh boy.
Tue 07/12/04 at 23:35
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Heh, Mister Literal indeed.
Tue 07/12/04 at 22:48
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By name, by nature it seems.
Amoozing.
Tue 07/12/04 at 22:44
Regular
"Sometimes..."
Posts: 22
I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you all that this forum name should be entitled 'Creative Typing'.

The following is a story I formulated in my head and transferred to this screen via a computer and keyboard.

Brian was a man's name and, coincidentally, was a man. He had gotten into his bed the night before and slept. He then awoke in the morning, which is what he wanted to do. After doing everything that is necessary to avoid getting laughed at, looked at and arrested, he left the house because the house was giving him the silent treatment.

Whilst walking on the path in the direction of the place where he earns money in exchange for him doing certain tasks during the hours of 9am until 5pm, he bumps into someone. He apologises and this someone happens to be Fred, who is also a man, a man's name and his friend from when they used to school.

They don't go to school anymore because at a certain age stipulated by the government, they had to sit down on chairs in front of tables with paper on them in a hall multiple times over a period of many days. On the paper was typed questions, which was done beforehand, and they had to answer these questions by writing with a pen or pencil. After a certain length of time that was predetermined, they had to stop answering the questions.

After many months, the answers that they had written were checked to see how many they got correct. The total of the correct answers was then transferred into a letter and put on a certificate that was given to them. After they received their many certificates, they had to make a decision as to whether they would go and learn more in a educational facility environment or to seek employment where they perform certain tasks set by someone in exchange for money. Both Brian and Fred chose to perform these tasks.

Brian had more letters close to the start of the alphabet on his certificates than Fred, so apparently that gives Brian the option to perform less tasks for more money.

Brian and Fred begin to converse using words spoken out of their mouths about certain incidents that they remembered when they went to school. After two hours had past, unnoticed and silently, Brian looked at his watch, which is a means to tell what time of the day it was, and realised that he was meant to be performing tasks for money instead of talking to Fred.

Brian says, using words spoken out of his mouth, that he is meant to be performing tasks for money and then runs to the place where he performs those tasks. He enters the building via the door in the wall, which allows access to the interior of the structure. The person who designates the tasks that Brian has to perform says using words spoken that he did not enter the building via the door in the wall at the correct time. Brian apologised and entered a room via a door in an interior wall. Brian went on to perform many tasks during the day.

Brian then exited the room, and then the building, and walked on the path in the direction of his house. He had forgiven the house for being silent, as he went straight into it's interior rooms via the door in the wall of the house. After doing a lot more necessary things, Brian started yawning and having trouble keeping his eyelids from covering his eyes for long periods of time so, after removing his clothes in a certain way and putting on different clothing, he got onto his bed and pulled the duvet cover over him and closed his eyelids.

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