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One night I'm bored with nothing to do,
Then I think hang on I'll write a review,
I go on to say how the game is great,
And add at the end its the best to date.
I'm over the limit oh what a shame,
Look's like I'll go over it all over again,
Finally its ready and I post it on,
Now wait patiently to see if I've won.
Check on the web there's no good news,
Waitings fustrating it gives me the blues,
Out with my mates and having fun,
But I keep thinking could I have won?
At last the days here the results are in,
Unfortunatly for me I did not win,
All that waiting drove me insane,
Now I can't choose my most wanted game.
Then I think hang on I'll write a review,
I go on to say how the game is great,
And add at the end its the best to date.
I'm over the limit oh what a shame,
Look's like I'll go over it all over again,
Finally its ready and I post it on,
Now wait patiently to see if I've won.
Check on the web there's no good news,
Waitings fustrating it gives me the blues,
Out with my mates and having fun,
But I keep thinking could I have won?
At last the days here the results are in,
Unfortunatly for me I did not win,
All that waiting drove me insane,
Now I can't choose my most wanted game.
board?
not bored?
I couldn't read past the second line, it's a butchery of spelling and grammar.
not bored?
I couldn't read past the second line, it's a butchery of spelling and grammar.
One night I'm bored with nothing to do,
Then I think hang on I'll write a review,
I go on to say how the game is great,
And add at the end its the best to date.
I'm over the limit oh what a shame,
Look's like I'll go over it all over again,
Finally its ready and I post it on,
Now wait patiently to see if I've won.
Check on the web there's no good news,
Waitings fustrating it gives me the blues,
Out with my mates and having fun,
But I keep thinking could I have won?
At last the days here the results are in,
Unfortunatly for me I did not win,
All that waiting drove me insane,
Now I can't choose my most wanted game.
Then I think hang on I'll write a review,
I go on to say how the game is great,
And add at the end its the best to date.
I'm over the limit oh what a shame,
Look's like I'll go over it all over again,
Finally its ready and I post it on,
Now wait patiently to see if I've won.
Check on the web there's no good news,
Waitings fustrating it gives me the blues,
Out with my mates and having fun,
But I keep thinking could I have won?
At last the days here the results are in,
Unfortunatly for me I did not win,
All that waiting drove me insane,
Now I can't choose my most wanted game.