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i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
EXTENDERD VERSHUN
i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
the bus i driving is yellow it yellow driving the bus oh no bus yellow cant be illegal and funds terorrismists it does so i paint it brown
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what did you think
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
EXTENDERD VERSHUN
i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
the bus i driving is yellow it yellow driving the bus oh no bus yellow cant be illegal and funds terorrismists it does so i paint it brown
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what did you think
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Shush you. I knew I'd do something like that so I thought I'd let it get past me to be ironic. Yeah.
*cough*
*cough*
eye'Aoe wrote:
> At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the
> slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
hahahahaha
> At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the
> slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
hahahahaha
so you dont like my story
:(
:(
eye'Aoe wrote:
> At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the
> slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
> At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the
> slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
You lot do realise that this is a regular just attempting to be funny?
It's been done before, it wasn't funny then.
It's been done before, it wasn't funny then.
Egads, I'm not reading it again.
øne-eye wrote:
> There's a creative writing forum, though maybe this "story"
> doesn't apply (not exactly creative is it?)...
Apparantly it does. It's there aswell.
> There's a creative writing forum, though maybe this "story"
> doesn't apply (not exactly creative is it?)...
Apparantly it does. It's there aswell.
caveat wrote:
> dont be so mean at least i tried
> so shut up
extended vershun?
What are you, 84?
> dont be so mean at least i tried
> so shut up
extended vershun?
What are you, 84?
There's a creative writing forum, though maybe this "story" doesn't apply (not exactly creative is it?)...
Where's the punctuation? Capital letters? What?
Where's the punctuation? Capital letters? What?
At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
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