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i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
EXTENDERD VERSHUN
i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
the bus i driving is yellow it yellow driving the bus oh no bus yellow cant be illegal and funds terorrismists it does so i paint it brown
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what did you think
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
EXTENDERD VERSHUN
i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
the bus i driving is yellow it yellow driving the bus oh no bus yellow cant be illegal and funds terorrismists it does so i paint it brown
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what did you think
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i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
EXTENDERD VERSHUN
i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
the bus i driving is yellow it yellow driving the bus oh no bus yellow cant be illegal and funds terorrismists it does so i paint it brown
end
what did you think
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
EXTENDERD VERSHUN
i thougt i write story for you
it was sunny the day i driving the bus the sun it blind me when i driving the bus a cat oh no shouted i when driving the bus to slow too stop but no the cat survive it did it go under the bus i driving then i went on holidays not when i driving the bus it must be noted then i saw cat it speak i say cat you speak it said yes i cat i speak and then from nowhere come a bus but think i oh no i not driving bus how can that be then the cat died it speak no more i go home and driving the bus
the bus i driving is yellow it yellow driving the bus oh no bus yellow cant be illegal and funds terorrismists it does so i paint it brown
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what did you think
I think you suck.
dont be so mean at least i tried
so shut up
so shut up
At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
There's a creative writing forum, though maybe this "story" doesn't apply (not exactly creative is it?)...
Where's the punctuation? Capital letters? What?
Where's the punctuation? Capital letters? What?
caveat wrote:
> dont be so mean at least i tried
> so shut up
extended vershun?
What are you, 84?
> dont be so mean at least i tried
> so shut up
extended vershun?
What are you, 84?
øne-eye wrote:
> There's a creative writing forum, though maybe this "story"
> doesn't apply (not exactly creative is it?)...
Apparantly it does. It's there aswell.
> There's a creative writing forum, though maybe this "story"
> doesn't apply (not exactly creative is it?)...
Apparantly it does. It's there aswell.
Egads, I'm not reading it again.
You lot do realise that this is a regular just attempting to be funny?
It's been done before, it wasn't funny then.
It's been done before, it wasn't funny then.
eye'Aoe wrote:
> At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the
> slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
> At least when the morons where genuinely this stupid it was the
> slightest bit amusing. But you're just pathetic.
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