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Wed 03/11/04 at 23:46
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"possibly impossible"
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The voices raced against each other for audience in his head. All the time, Tom tried to ignore them and concentrate.

'Keep Cool' they uttered, but how could he? The exam was making his head hurt more than ever and he was only on the second page.

What if someone else heard his voices? What if they made him do something odd? Would he be expelled?

'Be Quiet!' he thought to the voices queing for attention.

'Canny Lad. Will You. Trust Me.' came the reply.

Did they have a meaning? Perhaps the voices were telling him something that would benefit his exam paper. He looked at the next question and read it to himself.

'Explain Molly's character in brief and how it relates to the other characters in the story' He waited for a reply.

'Bonnie Lass. My Hero. May I hope.'

Not much of an answer, but it was better than anything he had thought of. Sweat dripped from his head as he turned the page to the next set of questions.

'Kiss me.'

What? Did that voice just say 'Kiss me'?

'Kiss me. Love.'

Right! That was it. Tom threw down the remainder of the packet of Love Hearts and tried to concentrate on his work. As the packet landed on the table, one sweet escaped. He watched it spin round and round and finally it fell, message side up, on the table.

'Bye Bye'.
Sat 06/11/04 at 08:36
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"Laughingstock"
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:-]
Fri 05/11/04 at 19:18
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Something creative, perhaps.
Fri 05/11/04 at 19:17
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"Fishing For Reddies"
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Haha, genius.

I want to do some creative writing. But what?
Fri 05/11/04 at 00:33
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"bei-jing-jing-jing"
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Ahhh, really nice little thing you got there.

Really nice.
Thu 04/11/04 at 19:52
"Darkness, always"
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Haha! I like that. Quick and witty.
Thu 04/11/04 at 00:22
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Nice twist if you don't mind me saying so.
Wed 03/11/04 at 23:46
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"possibly impossible"
Posts: 24,985
The voices raced against each other for audience in his head. All the time, Tom tried to ignore them and concentrate.

'Keep Cool' they uttered, but how could he? The exam was making his head hurt more than ever and he was only on the second page.

What if someone else heard his voices? What if they made him do something odd? Would he be expelled?

'Be Quiet!' he thought to the voices queing for attention.

'Canny Lad. Will You. Trust Me.' came the reply.

Did they have a meaning? Perhaps the voices were telling him something that would benefit his exam paper. He looked at the next question and read it to himself.

'Explain Molly's character in brief and how it relates to the other characters in the story' He waited for a reply.

'Bonnie Lass. My Hero. May I hope.'

Not much of an answer, but it was better than anything he had thought of. Sweat dripped from his head as he turned the page to the next set of questions.

'Kiss me.'

What? Did that voice just say 'Kiss me'?

'Kiss me. Love.'

Right! That was it. Tom threw down the remainder of the packet of Love Hearts and tried to concentrate on his work. As the packet landed on the table, one sweet escaped. He watched it spin round and round and finally it fell, message side up, on the table.

'Bye Bye'.

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