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I have noticed that there are a lot of good poets and story tellers on this site so I was hoping that some of you would be able to help. I myself am a terrible poet but my English assignment was to write a poem about time. Here's what I've got:
You’re born, then you die,
Oh, how time does fly.
An average of eighty
Though possibly more,
But your time will come,
Of that you can be sure.
Your time is restricted,
And the limit shan’t be lifted.
Time will go by, to quickly it seems,
And regrets will fill your heart,
When it’s to late and you realise
Your life’s nearer the end than the start.
There are hospitals, medicines and pills
But nothing cures when time kills.
What is immortal, eternal and constant,
What will live after you die?
There is only one thing that can remain forever,
Time is all that will survive.
It's not very good, I know, so could some of you please give me some advice on how to make it better.
You’re born, then you die,
Oh, how time does fly.
An average of eighty
Though possibly more,
But your time will come,
Of that you can be sure.
Your time is restricted,
And the limit shan’t be lifted.
Time will go by, to quickly it seems,
And regrets will fill your heart,
When it’s to late and you realise
Your life’s nearer the end than the start.
There are hospitals, medicines and pills
But nothing cures when time kills.
What is immortal, eternal and constant,
What will live after you die?
There is only one thing that can remain forever,
Time is all that will survive.
It's not very good, I know, so could some of you please give me some advice on how to make it better.
Time
Time.
Time moves past
At a constant rate
Not too fast
Not too slow
Always
The same.
It seems to us
Through perception
And boredom
That this is not true
But it is
Trust me.
Time.
Time moves past
At a constant rate
Not too fast
Not too slow
Always
The same.
It seems to us
Through perception
And boredom
That this is not true
But it is
Trust me.
Too many cheap rhymes.
I have noticed that there are a lot of good poets and story tellers on this site so I was hoping that some of you would be able to help. I myself am a terrible poet but my English assignment was to write a poem about time. Here's what I've got:
You’re born, then you die,
Oh, how time does fly.
An average of eighty
Though possibly more,
But your time will come,
Of that you can be sure.
Your time is restricted,
And the limit shan’t be lifted.
Time will go by, to quickly it seems,
And regrets will fill your heart,
When it’s to late and you realise
Your life’s nearer the end than the start.
There are hospitals, medicines and pills
But nothing cures when time kills.
What is immortal, eternal and constant,
What will live after you die?
There is only one thing that can remain forever,
Time is all that will survive.
It's not very good, I know, so could some of you please give me some advice on how to make it better.
You’re born, then you die,
Oh, how time does fly.
An average of eighty
Though possibly more,
But your time will come,
Of that you can be sure.
Your time is restricted,
And the limit shan’t be lifted.
Time will go by, to quickly it seems,
And regrets will fill your heart,
When it’s to late and you realise
Your life’s nearer the end than the start.
There are hospitals, medicines and pills
But nothing cures when time kills.
What is immortal, eternal and constant,
What will live after you die?
There is only one thing that can remain forever,
Time is all that will survive.
It's not very good, I know, so could some of you please give me some advice on how to make it better.