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There he is, no doormouse, no shame
scuttle, wheatgrain, soft, shrewd
He tackles the grain, I do the same
There he is, no vole, no goals
he nods and he bobs in the winds
He does what I say, he does what he's told
There he is, no brown mouse, no joy
I whip him and I beat him, I treat him
whip-lash, car-crash what became of my boy?
He whispers, he swings, he does no more
There he was, still, like cordial (orange or lemon)
He sleeps on my lap, no shrew. He's my son.
Wonderful.
[S]apologies
but two,
I am me,
but are you, you too?
> You goons. Poems dont have to rhyme on every line, we're not going
> back to play school.
> Idiots.
No one mentioned rhyming.
Idiots.
Jim-hat makes another great poem, i like how you got the rodent in it again.
Jim-hat rules.