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"SSC5 One Hell of a Battenberg"

Published in 13 magazine, Dec 2004

You might as well edit it.

This thread is linked by that site Ashman made, you see. :-)

Well done on spotting the deliberate mistake Rosalind. ;o)

I really should revise my stories at least once before posting, and promise to do so when I try to write sometihng for SSC6.

:-D

I didn't notice that the first time round.

Yeps, I think the last two Julie's are actually Helens.
Funny that, I must've been floating on the context...

Sorry to bump this after so long...

I'm a bit confused by the ending. Did you mean to say Helen rather than Julie the last two times, or am I just being dim?

very good story though.

Quality and what he said (post below).

A Pleasure to read, much better than anything i could ever write.....

Meka Dragon wrote:
> Thanks for reading and commenting.
>
> FFF, I have no idea what you're on about. ;o) (Thanks for pointing
> that out to me.)

You should have said she licked them off the floor, from among the hairs and cornflakes. Then noticed some more crumbs .... trailing up Julie's leg ....

e.g.
“Oh my God Julie, this is the best damn **expletive** I ever tasted.”

While I was reading that I thought that the secret ingredient was the addition of salt. I've never put salt in a sponge mixture. Not sure that it is something I will try :)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

FFF, I have no idea what you're on about. ;o) (Thanks for pointing that out to me.)

I love Battenberg.

Oh I couldn't resist reading it.

That was most excellent. A normal situation with quirks eventually turns into a surreal and almost Faustian situation. Your writing style is clear and crisp. I like.

It's fun to see how Markopan's mask will be incorporated by each writer.

I'll comment on the entries as I see/read them. Great start :)