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"The disgruntled poster"

I hate it here when the forum's slow,
Nothing to do and nowhere to go.
If only my post would be answered though,
I'd be a right happy so and so.

I hate it when I don't get hits,
From a post I wrote about having nits,
or a good looking girl doing the splits.
You'd think that would get them all in fits.

I hate it when they pass me by,
and on to other posts they fly,
but please, oh please don't ask me why,
It really makes me want to cry.

I hate it here when the forum's slow,
Nothing to do and nowhere to go.
If only my post would be answered though,
I'd be a right happy so and so.

I hate it when I don't get hits,
From a post I wrote about having nits,
or a good looking girl doing the splits.
You'd think that would get them all in fits.

I hate it when they pass me by,
and on to other posts they fly,
but please, oh please don't ask me why,
It really makes me want to cry.

Very short and to the point. Quite good. ;-)

four line rhyme schemes do not work - especially when you base the line around the rhyme at the end.

Shameful.

When people click a topic wrote and have no further say,
I tend to find it makes my skin upon nerve endings play,
It itches like awaking from a dream that's far too real,
And I get the feeling..
Once again..
To make the newbies...
..squeal...

Paradox: wrote:
> four line rhyme schemes do not work - especially when you base the
> line around the rhyme at the end.
>
> Shameful.

There's no such phrase as 'does not work' in my phrase dictionary.

But that's only because the page got torn out. I was bored. Ok! :-)

Paradox: wrote:
> four line rhyme schemes do not work - especially when you base the
> line around the rhyme at the end.
>
> Shameful.

haha

people who want not post in here
don't have to do so
it's up to how we're all feeling.

first my haiku now a limerick.

there once was a man called Eenis...

:D

There was once a man called Billy....

;-)

*laughs with immatureness*

It's funny 'cos it's true :^)

(The first post)