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Yesterday as i was playing in the yard,
A car came by and caught me off guard,
I stumbled and tripped until i fell over,
And then i got hit by a vauxhall Nova.
I tried and i tried to get back on to my feet,
But then i realised they were on the other side of the street,
As the driver started to drive away,
I noticed the numberplate read gameaday.
As the paramedics arrived and asked what was wrong,
I lied and said id hurt my dingdong,
They took me in to the hospital,
And kept me untill my recovery was full.
When i got home i went on gameaday,
Where WAKKA had wrote i killed somone today,
I tracked him down and looked at his Nova,
He asked if i was the one he hit over.
I chased him onto the road,
He fell over by slipping on a toad,
So i ran to the garage and got out his Nova,
But that little tramp had my lucky clover.
I got out and went to find him,
But he wasnt there must of been in a bin,
So i went in his house and stole some stuff,
Then went in the bedroom and did a big guff.
The story now is nearly over,
I drove away and crashed his nova,
I ended back inside the ER,
Just fr stealing his crappy car.
hope you like and i hope your not offended WAKKA.
if so who cares.
A car came by and caught me off guard,
I stumbled and tripped until i fell over,
And then i got hit by a vauxhall Nova.
I tried and i tried to get back on to my feet,
But then i realised they were on the other side of the street,
As the driver started to drive away,
I noticed the numberplate read gameaday.
As the paramedics arrived and asked what was wrong,
I lied and said id hurt my dingdong,
They took me in to the hospital,
And kept me untill my recovery was full.
When i got home i went on gameaday,
Where WAKKA had wrote i killed somone today,
I tracked him down and looked at his Nova,
He asked if i was the one he hit over.
I chased him onto the road,
He fell over by slipping on a toad,
So i ran to the garage and got out his Nova,
But that little tramp had my lucky clover.
I got out and went to find him,
But he wasnt there must of been in a bin,
So i went in his house and stole some stuff,
Then went in the bedroom and did a big guff.
The story now is nearly over,
I drove away and crashed his nova,
I ended back inside the ER,
Just fr stealing his crappy car.
hope you like and i hope your not offended WAKKA.
if so who cares.
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Yesterday as i was playing in the yard,
A car came by and caught me off guard,
I stumbled and tripped until i fell over,
And then i got hit by a vauxhall Nova.
I tried and i tried to get back on to my feet,
But then i realised they were on the other side of the street,
As the driver started to drive away,
I noticed the numberplate read gameaday.
As the paramedics arrived and asked what was wrong,
I lied and said id hurt my dingdong,
They took me in to the hospital,
And kept me untill my recovery was full.
When i got home i went on gameaday,
Where WAKKA had wrote i killed somone today,
I tracked him down and looked at his Nova,
He asked if i was the one he hit over.
I chased him onto the road,
He fell over by slipping on a toad,
So i ran to the garage and got out his Nova,
But that little tramp had my lucky clover.
I got out and went to find him,
But he wasnt there must of been in a bin,
So i went in his house and stole some stuff,
Then went in the bedroom and did a big guff.
The story now is nearly over,
I drove away and crashed his nova,
I ended back inside the ER,
Just fr stealing his crappy car.
hope you like and i hope your not offended WAKKA.
if so who cares.
A car came by and caught me off guard,
I stumbled and tripped until i fell over,
And then i got hit by a vauxhall Nova.
I tried and i tried to get back on to my feet,
But then i realised they were on the other side of the street,
As the driver started to drive away,
I noticed the numberplate read gameaday.
As the paramedics arrived and asked what was wrong,
I lied and said id hurt my dingdong,
They took me in to the hospital,
And kept me untill my recovery was full.
When i got home i went on gameaday,
Where WAKKA had wrote i killed somone today,
I tracked him down and looked at his Nova,
He asked if i was the one he hit over.
I chased him onto the road,
He fell over by slipping on a toad,
So i ran to the garage and got out his Nova,
But that little tramp had my lucky clover.
I got out and went to find him,
But he wasnt there must of been in a bin,
So i went in his house and stole some stuff,
Then went in the bedroom and did a big guff.
The story now is nearly over,
I drove away and crashed his nova,
I ended back inside the ER,
Just fr stealing his crappy car.
hope you like and i hope your not offended WAKKA.
if so who cares.
NIce work funny and cool 10/10
That was brilliant, slice. Absoulety amazing. A definite Gameaday winner. *looks outside at garage, sees space where car used to be* Slice, I'm gonna get you!! ;-)
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That was brilliant, slice. Absoulety amazing. A definite Gameaday winner. *looks outside at garage, sees space where car used to be* Slice, I'm gonna get you!! ;-)
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That was brilliant, slice. Absoulety amazing. A definite Gameaday winner. *looks outside at garage, sees space where car used to be* Slice, I'm gonna get you!! ;-)
Please write another one.
Please write another one.
Im finding it hard to express how sad I was after reading that poem. The words took hold of me and I had to kill my mum.
i will soon....
in response to wakka
in response to wakka
Shocking.
That was really bad, in my honest opinion.
While well constructed in places, a lot of it didn't scan properly making for a difficult and frustrating read - the opposite of what poetry should be.
While well constructed in places, a lot of it didn't scan properly making for a difficult and frustrating read - the opposite of what poetry should be.
everyone is entitled to thier opinion...
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