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Sun 25/04/04 at 11:19
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Yesterday as i was playing in the yard,
A car came by and caught me off guard,
I stumbled and tripped until i fell over,
And then i got hit by a vauxhall Nova.

I tried and i tried to get back on to my feet,
But then i realised they were on the other side of the street,
As the driver started to drive away,
I noticed the numberplate read gameaday.

As the paramedics arrived and asked what was wrong,
I lied and said id hurt my dingdong,
They took me in to the hospital,
And kept me untill my recovery was full.

When i got home i went on gameaday,
Where WAKKA had wrote i killed somone today,
I tracked him down and looked at his Nova,
He asked if i was the one he hit over.

I chased him onto the road,
He fell over by slipping on a toad,
So i ran to the garage and got out his Nova,
But that little tramp had my lucky clover.

I got out and went to find him,
But he wasnt there must of been in a bin,
So i went in his house and stole some stuff,
Then went in the bedroom and did a big guff.

The story now is nearly over,
I drove away and crashed his nova,
I ended back inside the ER,
Just fr stealing his crappy car.




hope you like and i hope your not offended WAKKA.
if so who cares.
Mon 26/04/04 at 17:52
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Please, spare me.
Mon 26/04/04 at 17:51
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sure infact ill include everyone who posted in this topic...
Mon 26/04/04 at 17:39
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"Redness Returneth"
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$L!(E wrote:
> Kewel does anyone want a new poem and if you want to be in it tell me
> i will be writing it on the weekend.

Can I be in it again?
Mon 26/04/04 at 17:30
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Take your time this time around.
Mon 26/04/04 at 16:34
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"Hot Gun On Ma Waist"
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Kewel does anyone want a new poem and if you want to be in it tell me i will be writing it on the weekend.
Sun 25/04/04 at 20:25
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www.bb-guns.co.uk
Sun 25/04/04 at 15:01
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"Hot Gun On Ma Waist"
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anyone???know where i can get a good uzi bb gun...
Sun 25/04/04 at 12:55
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Poetry should be like reading the Sunday Sport.

It should be about bringing pictures to the mind and stimulating imagination.

Your poem however was like a read of "Nuffield Maths for ages 12-14"

An imagination disaster.
Sun 25/04/04 at 12:50
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"Hot Gun On Ma Waist"
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who else likes poem
Sun 25/04/04 at 11:44
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"Redness Returneth"
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Because it looks weird and crap.

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