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Welcome to the story, this a bit like the never ending story. I will start off a story, and then you peepz, can add the next bit of a story, bit by bit. Go on. Rules to make it fair & fun:
Only add 200 words maximum in a single post.
After you post, don't post again until at least 3 other people have posted after your last post.
Enjoy, and i look forward to seeing a story with funny happenings!
Mike Swade.
Only add 200 words maximum in a single post.
After you post, don't post again until at least 3 other people have posted after your last post.
Enjoy, and i look forward to seeing a story with funny happenings!
Mike Swade.
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No this is THE END FF how inconsiderate for you to finish off a thread that would have been interesting. Still, look out soon for my story. Its very, very long (put it this way theres chapters).
THE END
> Forest Fan Torched himself to death. The End.
I can only hope...
I can only hope...
WAKKA wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
>
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
Torched himself to death. The End.
> Flockhart wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
>
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
Torched himself to death. The End.
a distant rumble grew closer as a thousand otters came careening towards the forum, luckily it's easy to despatch otters, just kick their face off.
Then suddenly, the thread started again....
>
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
.. screamed as Mr T pulled up in the A-Team van, and kicked both their heads off, thus ending the thread.
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
.. screamed as Mr T pulled up in the A-Team van, and kicked both their heads off, thus ending the thread.
All you who are quoting huge chunks of it are spaztics.
Flockhart wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
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