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At least it's your own review, which is also important. Try abit harder, and who knows, with a great review, you may be rewarded for your efforts ;)
If you try seperating it out into sections such as; Graphics, controls, plot, playability etc, then it would be better (and longer!).
Worth considering if you want to win yourself a game. Just take a look at the other reviews here to see what the staff expect for a winning review.