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Welcome to the story, this a bit like the never ending story. I will start off a story, and then you peepz, can add the next bit of a story, bit by bit. Go on. Rules to make it fair & fun:
Only add 200 words maximum in a single post.
After you post, don't post again until at least 3 other people have posted after your last post.
Enjoy, and i look forward to seeing a story with funny happenings!
Mike Swade.
Only add 200 words maximum in a single post.
After you post, don't post again until at least 3 other people have posted after your last post.
Enjoy, and i look forward to seeing a story with funny happenings!
Mike Swade.
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Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the castle....
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the castle....
Azul wrote:
> He spied a silhouette of a man who seemed to be holding some kind of
> stick in front of his waist. Johnny, calculating the distance from
> himself and the man, estimated the stick was approximately 5 or 6
> inches long.
Sorry, is my version of events just being brushed aside?
This single paragraph contains more dynamic word choice than this whole thread. As is it more punctual.
> He spied a silhouette of a man who seemed to be holding some kind of
> stick in front of his waist. Johnny, calculating the distance from
> himself and the man, estimated the stick was approximately 5 or 6
> inches long.
Sorry, is my version of events just being brushed aside?
This single paragraph contains more dynamic word choice than this whole thread. As is it more punctual.
Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the castle....
.. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the castle....
.. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
Flockhart wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
All you who are quoting huge chunks of it are spaztics.
>
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
.. screamed as Mr T pulled up in the A-Team van, and kicked both their heads off, thus ending the thread.
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
.. screamed as Mr T pulled up in the A-Team van, and kicked both their heads off, thus ending the thread.
Then suddenly, the thread started again....
a distant rumble grew closer as a thousand otters came careening towards the forum, luckily it's easy to despatch otters, just kick their face off.
WAKKA wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
>
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
Torched himself to death. The End.
> Flockhart wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Flockhart wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
>
>
> All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy,
> the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal
> floor...
>
> Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It
> shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the
> rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the
> tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!
>
> After much hesitation and with the taste of a lemon pop in mind he
> decided to follow the light until the end of the tunnel, upon
> climbing out of the ground he stood up to find a technicolour
> wonderland of castle's and dragon's, he walked towards the
> castle....
>
> .. And then he saw that great one pound coin lying on the ground and
> he kneeled down to get it but all of a sudden ..
>
> Another child, who had dissappeared weeks earlier ran past and took
> it, johnny ran after him into the castle gardens......
>
> Then he (Johnny) tripped the boy (Forest Fan) up and brought out his
> birthday present, a pokemon lighter. Then he ....
Torched himself to death. The End.
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