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Enjoy, and i look forward to seeing a story with funny happenings!
Mike Swade.
well... none of that. He got on both hands and knees and searched and searched for the glimmering of unwanted money...
He was gasping with thirst thinking of a lemon special squeezey pop!
...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and he found a dark tunnel..
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark, damp tunnel...
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
He spied a silhouette of a man who seemed to be holding some kind of stick in front of his waist. Johnny, calculating the distance from himself and the man, estimated the stick was approximately 5 or 6 inches long.
> FF you paedophile
It was supposed to be his astranged father.
> Lil Bro wrote:
> FF you paedophile
>
> It was supposed to be his astranged father.
Paging Dr Sigmund Freud to the thread..
> Forest Fan wrote:
> Lil Ginge wrote:
> ...Till he came to a wooded area in his travels on the ground.. and
> he found a dark tunnel..
>
> But little Johnny was shocked to see what wsa lurking in the dark,
> damp tunnel...
>
> A glimmering piece of metal on the ground shone far from the dark
> deep depths of the grimey tunnel. He was scared to see far in for
> what might be lurking! But he KNEW he wanted the lemon pop... he
> would do anything for the sweet lick of the icickle!
>
> So he started slowly and hesitantly to creep in the tunnel as the
> darkness swallowed his figure from the park..
All that could be heard was the whimpering of a scared little boy, the soft breathing followed by clink clonk clink clonk of the metal floor...
Till johnny - saw a strange light - at the end of the tunnel. It shone bright blue and orange, green and mauve - the colours of the rainbow shone and he did not know whether to get to the end of the tunnel to see this light further - or to turn back immediatly!