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Nothing to do and nowhere to go.
If only my post would be answered though,
I'd be a right happy so and so.
I hate it when I don't get hits,
From a post I wrote about having nits,
or a good looking girl doing the splits.
You'd think that would get them all in fits.
I hate it when they pass me by,
and on to other posts they fly,
but please, oh please don't ask me why,
It really makes me want to cry.
don't have to do so
it's up to how we're all feeling.
> four line rhyme schemes do not work - especially when you base the
> line around the rhyme at the end.
>
> Shameful.
haha
> four line rhyme schemes do not work - especially when you base the
> line around the rhyme at the end.
>
> Shameful.
There's no such phrase as 'does not work' in my phrase dictionary.
But that's only because the page got torn out. I was bored. Ok! :-)
I tend to find it makes my skin upon nerve endings play,
It itches like awaking from a dream that's far too real,
And I get the feeling..
Once again..
To make the newbies...
..squeal...
Shameful.
Nothing to do and nowhere to go.
If only my post would be answered though,
I'd be a right happy so and so.
I hate it when I don't get hits,
From a post I wrote about having nits,
or a good looking girl doing the splits.
You'd think that would get them all in fits.
I hate it when they pass me by,
and on to other posts they fly,
but please, oh please don't ask me why,
It really makes me want to cry.