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"Redeye's Final Voyage (G.A.D CHALLENGE 29TH JULY - 5TH AUGUST 2008)"

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Tue 29/07/08 at 21:02
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"the j-man"
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"Le sigh," sighed Jo’pel in a tone of notable discontentment. "The flow of the Z-neutrons into the anti-matter de-containment rhythmic stabiliser has been compromised." He walked across to the secondary control panel with an unusual slump in his posture. Arius had never seen his shipmate display such an air of defeatism since the unfortunate Aubergine Incident of 2784. "Surely, sir, there must be something we can do to rectify the situation, lest we die here in the cold wilderness of space?"

"My dear friend Arius, there may be nothing we can do, for as cerebral a race we have become, we have yet to discover the powers of magic. I cannot make right something that has been made wrong without the tools to do so."

Arius climbed back into his chair, and with a last forlorn glance towards the viewscreen, rested his head in his hands and rotated back to his normal position. "Oh, for something a little more comfortable on this, my final journey," he thought.

"My hammock would be yours, dearest Arius, were we not doomed to be lost to this empty vastness."

"Jo’pel? Have you tried recalibrating the X-particle solar leap processor?"

"Oh," said Jo’pel. "Quite right."
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Tue 29/07/08 at 21:02
Regular
"the j-man"
Posts: 68
"Le sigh," sighed Jo’pel in a tone of notable discontentment. "The flow of the Z-neutrons into the anti-matter de-containment rhythmic stabiliser has been compromised." He walked across to the secondary control panel with an unusual slump in his posture. Arius had never seen his shipmate display such an air of defeatism since the unfortunate Aubergine Incident of 2784. "Surely, sir, there must be something we can do to rectify the situation, lest we die here in the cold wilderness of space?"

"My dear friend Arius, there may be nothing we can do, for as cerebral a race we have become, we have yet to discover the powers of magic. I cannot make right something that has been made wrong without the tools to do so."

Arius climbed back into his chair, and with a last forlorn glance towards the viewscreen, rested his head in his hands and rotated back to his normal position. "Oh, for something a little more comfortable on this, my final journey," he thought.

"My hammock would be yours, dearest Arius, were we not doomed to be lost to this empty vastness."

"Jo’pel? Have you tried recalibrating the X-particle solar leap processor?"

"Oh," said Jo’pel. "Quite right."

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