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THE CAPTURING
I hate these things. I loath them with every bone in my body. I didn’t mean to disrespect them in any way. I didn’t mean to kill them, but they threw me in a grim prison without even a second thought. These foul armless brown creatures with their long snouts and poor attitude toward others didn’t listen to any human. They dismissed me instantly and made me suffer through countless torture sessions. My bones ached madly as I saw a glimpse of one of them coming into my cell and simply spiting upon my face. I hate them. I need to escape.
While the creature silently crept away I jumped onto his shoulders and cranked his neck in a single jolt. Arg, what have I done! The pain and anger had gotten to me! My head wasn’t straight. I’m so dumb! They will surely destroy me now. One death on my part was enough but not two! I can’t die here. Not like this. These strange handcuffs that latch my arms to my chest wouldn’t permit me to go far, but now the cell door was open. I couldn’t give up this chance! I scampered out weakened and unlocked as many others’ cells as possible. The alarm begins to boom an annoying tune that caused my heart to nearly burst. My bare feet clap against the floor as I ran around. “Git back here” one of them say while holding the skin grinding device in their mouth I hated so. My nerves ate at me and I fall to the floor accidentally. The creature then walks over to me and giggles intently. I shivered on the floor defenselessly. My fear enlightened him. He picked me up with his mouth and dragged me across the jagged metal to who seemed to be his leader.
“Why do you bring that to me, kill it! Git it away” he roared. I felt the creature that had me in his mouth tremble slightly at the leaders voice. Ha, now I know why he found such humour in the weak. He lifted me up and slammed me back to the floor to mangle me. I hated him. After what seemed to be an hour of being dragged around that technological wasteland they call their home, I get dropped into a well-like funnel. What was next? What now? “You killed my brother creature” he spoke. “You ran him over with your space vehicle while he was just looking for food. He was all I had in the world! That could have been a mistake but you killed another! Why alien! Why” he cried with small tears in his eyes. I looked up from my hole and just stared as if I didn’t comprehend to avoid more confrontation. “Go on don’t speak! It won’t help you”. He touches a small button on the wall and water begins to lift from the ground. How cruel.
The brown creature pushed the button several more times in aggravation. The water filled to my neck and I struggled to kick up to the surface but I was far too tired. Forget it. Forget this all! I dove underwater to speed up the process. I didn’t care, but then I heard a loud noise from the surface. What could it be? Was he still screaming his worthless garbage? The loud noise was followed by screeches of death and agony. Confused I tried to focus my eyes to what was happening above but I couldn’t. A strange hand appears atop of me. Without a moments notice I use all my strength to reach up and I was quickly rushed away. I gasped for air as I was elevated far from the ground. I could see the creatures looking up at me shouting ridiculous things as I got drifted away
My friends. They found out where I was so they came over here on their ship to get me! Even though they were a little late to prevent any suffering I still was touched by their concern. I glanced at Blake as he held me. I couldn’t talk but yet the famished look I gave him told him how I felt. My friends. My great friends. I love them. They are always their for me. I love them.
End…
I hate these things. I loath them with every bone in my body. I didn’t mean to disrespect them in any way. I didn’t mean to kill them, but they threw me in a grim prison without even a second thought. These foul armless brown creatures with their long snouts and poor attitude toward others didn’t listen to any human. They dismissed me instantly and made me suffer through countless torture sessions. My bones ached madly as I saw a glimpse of one of them coming into my cell and simply spiting upon my face. I hate them. I need to escape.
While the creature silently crept away I jumped onto his shoulders and cranked his neck in a single jolt. Arg, what have I done! The pain and anger had gotten to me! My head wasn’t straight. I’m so dumb! They will surely destroy me now. One death on my part was enough but not two! I can’t die here. Not like this. These strange handcuffs that latch my arms to my chest wouldn’t permit me to go far, but now the cell door was open. I couldn’t give up this chance! I scampered out weakened and unlocked as many others’ cells as possible. The alarm begins to boom an annoying tune that caused my heart to nearly burst. My bare feet clap against the floor as I ran around. “Git back here” one of them say while holding the skin grinding device in their mouth I hated so. My nerves ate at me and I fall to the floor accidentally. The creature then walks over to me and giggles intently. I shivered on the floor defenselessly. My fear enlightened him. He picked me up with his mouth and dragged me across the jagged metal to who seemed to be his leader.
“Why do you bring that to me, kill it! Git it away” he roared. I felt the creature that had me in his mouth tremble slightly at the leaders voice. Ha, now I know why he found such humour in the weak. He lifted me up and slammed me back to the floor to mangle me. I hated him. After what seemed to be an hour of being dragged around that technological wasteland they call their home, I get dropped into a well-like funnel. What was next? What now? “You killed my brother creature” he spoke. “You ran him over with your space vehicle while he was just looking for food. He was all I had in the world! That could have been a mistake but you killed another! Why alien! Why” he cried with small tears in his eyes. I looked up from my hole and just stared as if I didn’t comprehend to avoid more confrontation. “Go on don’t speak! It won’t help you”. He touches a small button on the wall and water begins to lift from the ground. How cruel.
The brown creature pushed the button several more times in aggravation. The water filled to my neck and I struggled to kick up to the surface but I was far too tired. Forget it. Forget this all! I dove underwater to speed up the process. I didn’t care, but then I heard a loud noise from the surface. What could it be? Was he still screaming his worthless garbage? The loud noise was followed by screeches of death and agony. Confused I tried to focus my eyes to what was happening above but I couldn’t. A strange hand appears atop of me. Without a moments notice I use all my strength to reach up and I was quickly rushed away. I gasped for air as I was elevated far from the ground. I could see the creatures looking up at me shouting ridiculous things as I got drifted away
My friends. They found out where I was so they came over here on their ship to get me! Even though they were a little late to prevent any suffering I still was touched by their concern. I glanced at Blake as he held me. I couldn’t talk but yet the famished look I gave him told him how I felt. My friends. My great friends. I love them. They are always their for me. I love them.
End…
i wrote it in this many minutes.....(------)
Resolution was absolutely terrible.
Peculiar story. Some bits made me laugh.
I'll read it in precisely 10 seconds....
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THE CAPTURING
I hate these things. I loath them with every bone in my body. I didn’t mean to disrespect them in any way. I didn’t mean to kill them, but they threw me in a grim prison without even a second thought. These foul armless brown creatures with their long snouts and poor attitude toward others didn’t listen to any human. They dismissed me instantly and made me suffer through countless torture sessions. My bones ached madly as I saw a glimpse of one of them coming into my cell and simply spiting upon my face. I hate them. I need to escape.
While the creature silently crept away I jumped onto his shoulders and cranked his neck in a single jolt. Arg, what have I done! The pain and anger had gotten to me! My head wasn’t straight. I’m so dumb! They will surely destroy me now. One death on my part was enough but not two! I can’t die here. Not like this. These strange handcuffs that latch my arms to my chest wouldn’t permit me to go far, but now the cell door was open. I couldn’t give up this chance! I scampered out weakened and unlocked as many others’ cells as possible. The alarm begins to boom an annoying tune that caused my heart to nearly burst. My bare feet clap against the floor as I ran around. “Git back here” one of them say while holding the skin grinding device in their mouth I hated so. My nerves ate at me and I fall to the floor accidentally. The creature then walks over to me and giggles intently. I shivered on the floor defenselessly. My fear enlightened him. He picked me up with his mouth and dragged me across the jagged metal to who seemed to be his leader.
“Why do you bring that to me, kill it! Git it away” he roared. I felt the creature that had me in his mouth tremble slightly at the leaders voice. Ha, now I know why he found such humour in the weak. He lifted me up and slammed me back to the floor to mangle me. I hated him. After what seemed to be an hour of being dragged around that technological wasteland they call their home, I get dropped into a well-like funnel. What was next? What now? “You killed my brother creature” he spoke. “You ran him over with your space vehicle while he was just looking for food. He was all I had in the world! That could have been a mistake but you killed another! Why alien! Why” he cried with small tears in his eyes. I looked up from my hole and just stared as if I didn’t comprehend to avoid more confrontation. “Go on don’t speak! It won’t help you”. He touches a small button on the wall and water begins to lift from the ground. How cruel.
The brown creature pushed the button several more times in aggravation. The water filled to my neck and I struggled to kick up to the surface but I was far too tired. Forget it. Forget this all! I dove underwater to speed up the process. I didn’t care, but then I heard a loud noise from the surface. What could it be? Was he still screaming his worthless garbage? The loud noise was followed by screeches of death and agony. Confused I tried to focus my eyes to what was happening above but I couldn’t. A strange hand appears atop of me. Without a moments notice I use all my strength to reach up and I was quickly rushed away. I gasped for air as I was elevated far from the ground. I could see the creatures looking up at me shouting ridiculous things as I got drifted away
My friends. They found out where I was so they came over here on their ship to get me! Even though they were a little late to prevent any suffering I still was touched by their concern. I glanced at Blake as he held me. I couldn’t talk but yet the famished look I gave him told him how I felt. My friends. My great friends. I love them. They are always their for me. I love them.
End…
I hate these things. I loath them with every bone in my body. I didn’t mean to disrespect them in any way. I didn’t mean to kill them, but they threw me in a grim prison without even a second thought. These foul armless brown creatures with their long snouts and poor attitude toward others didn’t listen to any human. They dismissed me instantly and made me suffer through countless torture sessions. My bones ached madly as I saw a glimpse of one of them coming into my cell and simply spiting upon my face. I hate them. I need to escape.
While the creature silently crept away I jumped onto his shoulders and cranked his neck in a single jolt. Arg, what have I done! The pain and anger had gotten to me! My head wasn’t straight. I’m so dumb! They will surely destroy me now. One death on my part was enough but not two! I can’t die here. Not like this. These strange handcuffs that latch my arms to my chest wouldn’t permit me to go far, but now the cell door was open. I couldn’t give up this chance! I scampered out weakened and unlocked as many others’ cells as possible. The alarm begins to boom an annoying tune that caused my heart to nearly burst. My bare feet clap against the floor as I ran around. “Git back here” one of them say while holding the skin grinding device in their mouth I hated so. My nerves ate at me and I fall to the floor accidentally. The creature then walks over to me and giggles intently. I shivered on the floor defenselessly. My fear enlightened him. He picked me up with his mouth and dragged me across the jagged metal to who seemed to be his leader.
“Why do you bring that to me, kill it! Git it away” he roared. I felt the creature that had me in his mouth tremble slightly at the leaders voice. Ha, now I know why he found such humour in the weak. He lifted me up and slammed me back to the floor to mangle me. I hated him. After what seemed to be an hour of being dragged around that technological wasteland they call their home, I get dropped into a well-like funnel. What was next? What now? “You killed my brother creature” he spoke. “You ran him over with your space vehicle while he was just looking for food. He was all I had in the world! That could have been a mistake but you killed another! Why alien! Why” he cried with small tears in his eyes. I looked up from my hole and just stared as if I didn’t comprehend to avoid more confrontation. “Go on don’t speak! It won’t help you”. He touches a small button on the wall and water begins to lift from the ground. How cruel.
The brown creature pushed the button several more times in aggravation. The water filled to my neck and I struggled to kick up to the surface but I was far too tired. Forget it. Forget this all! I dove underwater to speed up the process. I didn’t care, but then I heard a loud noise from the surface. What could it be? Was he still screaming his worthless garbage? The loud noise was followed by screeches of death and agony. Confused I tried to focus my eyes to what was happening above but I couldn’t. A strange hand appears atop of me. Without a moments notice I use all my strength to reach up and I was quickly rushed away. I gasped for air as I was elevated far from the ground. I could see the creatures looking up at me shouting ridiculous things as I got drifted away
My friends. They found out where I was so they came over here on their ship to get me! Even though they were a little late to prevent any suffering I still was touched by their concern. I glanced at Blake as he held me. I couldn’t talk but yet the famished look I gave him told him how I felt. My friends. My great friends. I love them. They are always their for me. I love them.
End…