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tell me what you think
I was exhausted! The bed wrapped it’s arms around me, I fell into a deep coma like sleep. My body was dead.
A black sergeant called Mendaz appeared from the Planet Reach.A bright light shocked me ripped through me. He charged like a tiger roaring like a tank . I was playing Halo. He yelled , ” We need your help trooper!”
All of a sudden I woke, cold, shaken and afraid. I sat thinking of the sergeant’s
Words “ Why me ?” I hurried down stairs it was 8 am. The x-box was calling me ; before I knew it I was in the game ; the polygons had grabbed me! I didn’t know what was happening I was afraid. It was petrifying.
I looked around me I had ventured into the world of halo!The world was a ring a very big ring,a humongous ring. There were two sorts of life as all I could see,marines or soldiers ,who were six foot tall black and white,human species. Then there were the convenent . Among them were the hunters they fight with a fuel rod gun and carry an enormous and nearly-impervius metal shield.
I knew what I had to do. I had played this game so many times. The flood were the enemy they were eating everything they could including mankind. I had to destroy them . I thought of home .It was heaven : soft bed,tv,x-box,ps2,food and family .Will I ? Can I ? Why me ? But I know what I’ve got to do there is no choice no if, no but, just got to do it for the thought of mankind.
“ Right Mendaz can you get me an mi5 assult rifle ?”
“ Yes sir right away sir.”
“No on the double marine!”
I turn to another marine, “ You find me some grenades and a pistol or sniper rifle.” I’ m ready now, I want to spill some blood, I want to get the hell out of here! And with that said I rushed in yelling screaming shouting.
All of a sudden I ground to a halt. Inspecting around me all of my comrades had fallen to the ground dead I glimpsed at the convents dead the blood mixed on the floor orange purple red with guns bombs ……. I heard something it was approaching me I hid behind a rock until it was in my sights it it was an enormous elite I felt inside my pocket and pulled out a granade and bit the ring off. and lobbed it out 5,4,3,2,BANG I looked up it was bonfire night. All the grenades had exploded and bullets flying around. Entrails all over. I stopped .Staring around I saw a jeep I ran to it and flew into it and started it I was gone.it was my victory and I had won honour for the men.
I was on my way to the control room . I set off the detenator and legged it out to the crash site for the Piller of Autum (this is the ship I rode in on). I needed to find a fighter plane I took off to the weapons room and got my weapons then found a warthog.I got in and started her up. Now I am on my way home to find the fighter ship .When I found the ship the master chief was there I stumbled in. it was all over we were free .
I was exhausted! The bed wrapped it’s arms around me, I fell into a deep coma like sleep. My body was dead.
A black sergeant called Mendaz appeared from the Planet Reach.A bright light shocked me ripped through me. He charged like a tiger roaring like a tank . I was playing Halo. He yelled , ” We need your help trooper!”
All of a sudden I woke, cold, shaken and afraid. I sat thinking of the sergeant’s
Words “ Why me ?” I hurried down stairs it was 8 am. The x-box was calling me ; before I knew it I was in the game ; the polygons had grabbed me! I didn’t know what was happening I was afraid. It was petrifying.
I looked around me I had ventured into the world of halo!The world was a ring a very big ring,a humongous ring. There were two sorts of life as all I could see,marines or soldiers ,who were six foot tall black and white,human species. Then there were the convenent . Among them were the hunters they fight with a fuel rod gun and carry an enormous and nearly-impervius metal shield.
I knew what I had to do. I had played this game so many times. The flood were the enemy they were eating everything they could including mankind. I had to destroy them . I thought of home .It was heaven : soft bed,tv,x-box,ps2,food and family .Will I ? Can I ? Why me ? But I know what I’ve got to do there is no choice no if, no but, just got to do it for the thought of mankind.
“ Right Mendaz can you get me an mi5 assult rifle ?”
“ Yes sir right away sir.”
“No on the double marine!”
I turn to another marine, “ You find me some grenades and a pistol or sniper rifle.” I’ m ready now, I want to spill some blood, I want to get the hell out of here! And with that said I rushed in yelling screaming shouting.
All of a sudden I ground to a halt. Inspecting around me all of my comrades had fallen to the ground dead I glimpsed at the convents dead the blood mixed on the floor orange purple red with guns bombs ……. I heard something it was approaching me I hid behind a rock until it was in my sights it it was an enormous elite I felt inside my pocket and pulled out a granade and bit the ring off. and lobbed it out 5,4,3,2,BANG I looked up it was bonfire night. All the grenades had exploded and bullets flying around. Entrails all over. I stopped .Staring around I saw a jeep I ran to it and flew into it and started it I was gone.it was my victory and I had won honour for the men.
I was on my way to the control room . I set off the detenator and legged it out to the crash site for the Piller of Autum (this is the ship I rode in on). I needed to find a fighter plane I took off to the weapons room and got my weapons then found a warthog.I got in and started her up. Now I am on my way home to find the fighter ship .When I found the ship the master chief was there I stumbled in. it was all over we were free .
tell me what you think
I was exhausted! The bed wrapped it’s arms around me, I fell into a deep coma like sleep. My body was dead.
A black sergeant called Mendaz appeared from the Planet Reach.A bright light shocked me ripped through me. He charged like a tiger roaring like a tank . I was playing Halo. He yelled , ” We need your help trooper!”
All of a sudden I woke, cold, shaken and afraid. I sat thinking of the sergeant’s
Words “ Why me ?” I hurried down stairs it was 8 am. The x-box was calling me ; before I knew it I was in the game ; the polygons had grabbed me! I didn’t know what was happening I was afraid. It was petrifying.
I looked around me I had ventured into the world of halo!The world was a ring a very big ring,a humongous ring. There were two sorts of life as all I could see,marines or soldiers ,who were six foot tall black and white,human species. Then there were the convenent . Among them were the hunters they fight with a fuel rod gun and carry an enormous and nearly-impervius metal shield.
I knew what I had to do. I had played this game so many times. The flood were the enemy they were eating everything they could including mankind. I had to destroy them . I thought of home .It was heaven : soft bed,tv,x-box,ps2,food and family .Will I ? Can I ? Why me ? But I know what I’ve got to do there is no choice no if, no but, just got to do it for the thought of mankind.
“ Right Mendaz can you get me an mi5 assult rifle ?”
“ Yes sir right away sir.”
“No on the double marine!”
I turn to another marine, “ You find me some grenades and a pistol or sniper rifle.” I’ m ready now, I want to spill some blood, I want to get the hell out of here! And with that said I rushed in yelling screaming shouting.
All of a sudden I ground to a halt. Inspecting around me all of my comrades had fallen to the ground dead I glimpsed at the convents dead the blood mixed on the floor orange purple red with guns bombs ……. I heard something it was approaching me I hid behind a rock until it was in my sights it it was an enormous elite I felt inside my pocket and pulled out a granade and bit the ring off. and lobbed it out 5,4,3,2,BANG I looked up it was bonfire night. All the grenades had exploded and bullets flying around. Entrails all over. I stopped .Staring around I saw a jeep I ran to it and flew into it and started it I was gone.it was my victory and I had won honour for the men.
I was on my way to the control room . I set off the detenator and legged it out to the crash site for the Piller of Autum (this is the ship I rode in on). I needed to find a fighter plane I took off to the weapons room and got my weapons then found a warthog.I got in and started her up. Now I am on my way home to find the fighter ship .When I found the ship the master chief was there I stumbled in. it was all over we were free .
I was exhausted! The bed wrapped it’s arms around me, I fell into a deep coma like sleep. My body was dead.
A black sergeant called Mendaz appeared from the Planet Reach.A bright light shocked me ripped through me. He charged like a tiger roaring like a tank . I was playing Halo. He yelled , ” We need your help trooper!”
All of a sudden I woke, cold, shaken and afraid. I sat thinking of the sergeant’s
Words “ Why me ?” I hurried down stairs it was 8 am. The x-box was calling me ; before I knew it I was in the game ; the polygons had grabbed me! I didn’t know what was happening I was afraid. It was petrifying.
I looked around me I had ventured into the world of halo!The world was a ring a very big ring,a humongous ring. There were two sorts of life as all I could see,marines or soldiers ,who were six foot tall black and white,human species. Then there were the convenent . Among them were the hunters they fight with a fuel rod gun and carry an enormous and nearly-impervius metal shield.
I knew what I had to do. I had played this game so many times. The flood were the enemy they were eating everything they could including mankind. I had to destroy them . I thought of home .It was heaven : soft bed,tv,x-box,ps2,food and family .Will I ? Can I ? Why me ? But I know what I’ve got to do there is no choice no if, no but, just got to do it for the thought of mankind.
“ Right Mendaz can you get me an mi5 assult rifle ?”
“ Yes sir right away sir.”
“No on the double marine!”
I turn to another marine, “ You find me some grenades and a pistol or sniper rifle.” I’ m ready now, I want to spill some blood, I want to get the hell out of here! And with that said I rushed in yelling screaming shouting.
All of a sudden I ground to a halt. Inspecting around me all of my comrades had fallen to the ground dead I glimpsed at the convents dead the blood mixed on the floor orange purple red with guns bombs ……. I heard something it was approaching me I hid behind a rock until it was in my sights it it was an enormous elite I felt inside my pocket and pulled out a granade and bit the ring off. and lobbed it out 5,4,3,2,BANG I looked up it was bonfire night. All the grenades had exploded and bullets flying around. Entrails all over. I stopped .Staring around I saw a jeep I ran to it and flew into it and started it I was gone.it was my victory and I had won honour for the men.
I was on my way to the control room . I set off the detenator and legged it out to the crash site for the Piller of Autum (this is the ship I rode in on). I needed to find a fighter plane I took off to the weapons room and got my weapons then found a warthog.I got in and started her up. Now I am on my way home to find the fighter ship .When I found the ship the master chief was there I stumbled in. it was all over we were free .