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Tue 04/06/02 at 21:16
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In Episode I the PS2 Crew went in to Rob the highest security bank in the city to get "the rare artefact" when they got there Pro Evo, spike and Triple H held the bank up whilst the rest of the crew went and got the artefact, but when they got there only one thing was there which turned out to be an instruction type thing that told the Crew the place they had to go to find the main artefact. They have to go to the "temple of doom" one problem, where the hell is that?
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Tom picked up the phone and started to dial a number but was suddenly cut off by a loud noise coming down from the other end of the phone, it sounded like some one had pulled the phone line out but it was actually the Crews top new machine...

"So I noticed you got the super secret spy machine working then Resi" Longy said trying to inspect it

It looked like a normal computer but instead of a mouse it had a roller ball that you moved around instead, the computer screen was massive filled a wall

"All ready for testing" Resi smiled impressed at what he had managed to create

"So hows this thing work then" ssxpro ask sounding interesting

Resi pressed a button and moved the roller ball around he pressed a button and it came straight to KR walking down a street some where in the city, he was looking around with his MP5 strapped over his shoulder and he was just casually walking around.

"What’s this prove" Longy butted in before Resi could finish off explaining

"KR raise your right hand in the air if you can hear me" Resi said into a microphone

KR raised his right hand in the air and waved it twice to tell them he got the signal that he had received the message.

"WOW, that is cool" Longy gasped in amazement "how does he get the information?” he added

"Its easy really, he has a tiny ear phone in so he just listens and no one notices the difference.

With that Resi switched off the camera from KR and told the rest of the crew that this was the way that they would find the "temple of doom", Resi scanned the whole of the city but couldn’t find the temple, he gave ssxpro a go on the controls, he follows KR for a while longer and suddenly he turns into an alley way, he came out with a familiar face...
They both got into the same car and headed in the direction of the

"So that’s where KR was really going, he was going to get..." Longy started

"Yeh he was going to get one of my contacts" Tom butted in

"Hopefully he should come back with KR to help us find the Cronies" ssxpro murmured

Tom looked out the main window of the Crews building and stared out of it and looked over the horizon waiting for KR to return with the first of his contacts.

"They have arrived" Tom announced to the rest of the group

The whole group rushed to the window to see who it was, KR stepped out of the black Dodger viper with his MP5 strapped around him he walked straight in to the building. The mystery person left a rocket launcher on his seat and grabbed his Ak-47 and followed KR in side.

"So who is this then" Longy stood up and asked Tom

"This is Badgerman" Tom said proudly "him and I go back a long way"

The group sniggered with Resi laughing uncontrollably until KR stepped in and also said that he had know badgerman for quiet a while as well.

"I will lead you to the temple of Doom" badgerman said confidently

"A couple of years ago we went in there but only just escaped with our life’s didn’t we lads, remember when KR and Longy were in rival groups we set them up in there" Badgerman added

"Oh yeh I remember that" KR said laughing

"Does this mean we need to split into groups again?” Ssxpro asked Longy

The Group sat round deciding what to do.

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!

Suddenly a car bomb exploded out side whilst the rest of the crew were inside, no one was injured from the crew but the bomb set a chain reaction of explosions out side...

"Damn them people just blew up ma car" badgerman whispered

The Crew were powerless to stop anything because their bullets could not hit through the bullet proof glass they were watching out of.

"Its Quazimodo from the Cronies" Resi shouted, he was watching him using his super secret spy machine.

Resi zoomed in closer on noticed that he had nicked Badgermans rocket launcher, Resi looked in horror as he saw Quazimodo turn around with the rocket launcher in his hand and Resi saw how Quazi had the safety cache off so one button press and it was good bye to all the Crew members. Quazi aimed towards the bullet proof Glass where all the crew members were....

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!

A shot rang out from some where and Quazimodo lay dead on the floor with a bullet hole in his head.

"Wow, some dude just saved our life’s" KR said sounding impressed

"Yeh this guy just saved the whole of the PS2 Crew" longy added

"Just because Pro Evo, Triple H and Spike are in jail don’t mean they have left the crew" KR butted back in

"Pro Evo is looking after us" Badgerman laughed "an old friend of his has just saved us"

The whole Crew looked at him but Badgerman would not tell who it was all he would say was that he was an old friend, the crew thought he was hiding some thing but thought they would leave it for a while.

"Anyways" Ssxpro started "We have a lot to get through in the next few days" he added

"Yeh, we have to defeat the Cronies, go to the temple of doom and rescue the Three over members of the crew" Tom added

"Well lets get our priorities in order" Longy ordered

"Yeh lets go and rescue them three first" KR added

"No" longy replied "That is last, first we go to the temple, defeat the cronies and then get them three out of jail" He added

Some of the Crew disagreed but Longy was determined to get people to see his views. The Crew were told by Longy to Follow Badgerman who would lead them to the Temple of Doom.

Badgerman and Tom went in the front car and were followed by a row of Taxi's after Quazimodo blew the Crews cars up. It could have been much worse if it wasn’t for the mystery person with a sniper rifle.

Badgerman had to give instructions to the driver to find the place.

Finally they got to the place and one Crew member from each taxi and strapped a little Bomb on the back tyre, luckily Longy didn’t see or else he would have took them off because kill civilians is bad in his eyes...

"So we finally made it then" Badgerman told the group looking pleased with finding the place

"Right what we are going to do is follow this map and then get out straight after" ssxpro said handing the Map to Longy.

"right" Longy started "KR, Tom and badgerman go and secure the area" he added

KR walked forward with his MP5 strapped around his shoulder, Tom got out his Laser gun and Badgerman pulled up his AK-47 and the three of them walked towards the temple.

"I have a funny feeling, I can feel it in the pit of my stomach" Tom said sounding under confident for the first time in quiet a while

"probably the Indian you had last nigh" KR laughed trying to raise Toms Spirit

"yeh and don’t worry, we have never had a casualty in our team have we KR" Badgerman added

Longy and the rest of the Crew kept their distance as they watched the three guys crept closer to the temple, the temple itself was pretty small but his wasn't their main objective, the main objective was to kill all of the Cronies.

Suddenly Adrian came out the temple door with a Grenade in his hand, he pulled the pin out through it straight at KR, Tom and badgerman...

A hail of bullets rained in on Adrian’s body from the three guys bullets, the rest of the crew ran for cover, the grenade was still flying through the air....

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The grenade exploded in mid air a few feet infront of KR and Tom, Badgerman had quickly ran in the opposite direction to thank the other members of the Crew who had hid but still shot the grenade to pieces.

"Cheers who ever shot the grenade" Badgerman shouted even though he was standing near them

"What?" Longy asked "We didn’t shoot no grenade, the shot came from behind us" he added

"It was him again" Badgerman said was a massive grin on his face

The whole of the crew had now made themselves an easier job, there was only about 7 Cronie members left to kill before making the city peaceful again (or was that what they wanted the people to believe).

All 6 members of the PS2 Crew walked cautiously into the temple wondering what they would find inside...

Inside was one room with a big black box on a table in the middle of a table...

SUDDENLY the box sprang open revealing 11 items...

"But wait, there is only 7 of us here but there is 11 items" Longy said aloud

"obviously we have the three in prison" KR stated the obvious

"So that leaves us with one" badgerman wondered about his old friend

KR walked over to the Box and picked up what looked like a handle
*Press here* it said underneath it

KR pressed the button and out shot a lime Green beam of light he had got a light sabre, the rest of the crew rushed over to get what they could get, KR quickly picked up a Blitz ball and Saved it for when Pro Evo would return...

The Crew walked out of the temple feeling much better and they were ready to face the Cronies...

"So lets go back to base" ssxpro told the group

They walked back to base seeing as it was only round the corner.

Longy sat playing with his Blue light sabre and challenging KR to duels.

The crew still had Shadow,Asher,Natbuc,Liquid,RM18 and CDouch to kill, so they went off in search off them...

The crew walked around the city for a good 30 mins and amazingly they walked past a sign...

*open day TODAY 2:30*

"well its just gone 2:30" Resi told Longy

"Lets go to it then" KR told the rest of the group

The 7 members of the crew walked towards the open day field and for some reason just knew that the cronies would be there, The PS2 Crew were ready for the final showdown with the Sony Cronies... Badgerman was the first to spot them sitting near the exit way looking nervous..

"waiting for us" Badgerman shouted

"There goes our surprise attack" Tom grinned

All 7 members of the cronies faced off against the 7 members of the PS2 Crew, they all stood face to face, Suddenly CDouch pulled out an Uzi and started to fire, Resi fell to the ground with three bullet holes in his leg. Within 5 seconds CDouch was dead, once again a cronie member had a bullet in his head from the mystery person but this time KR had also shot him aswell. This time the mystery person didn't hide for long, he jumped down from a near by tree and took off his mask...

"Hows You doing Neo" KR laughed

"yeh nice shot Neo" Badgerman patted him on the back

"ENOUGH OF THE CELEBRATIONS" Asher shouted

He smiled an evil smile and from behind him came a horde of people all wearing Red shirts...

"Newbies" Longy muttered "they come to our city and then mess the place up" he added

Suddenly 7 people from behind the PS2 Crew put their hands on the back of the crew.

"We are the ready Asher" One of them said

"great" Asher smiled "now lets take four of these and hold them hostage he added"

"Right" Another stated solemnly

The 7 people let Longy, ssxpro and Resi go but held KR, Neo, Badgerman and Tom hostage.

"Remember us" One of them said "We were destroyed by you four" he added

"But now THE NINTENDO ELITES ARE BACK" Sibs (the leader) shouted

Asher and Sibs shook hands as the four crew members were led away, what they needed now was help from some one...

Suddenly another old face turned up...

"Quinty you will help us wont you" Tom asked

Quinty looked at all four members and then turned the other way, his last words to the four of them were "you will die soon"

Tom, KR, Badgerman and Neo were led away but surprisingly they still had their guns on them, what they needed now was help but who could save them now?.....

KR.

Episode III should be up soon.

Welcome to Neo who joined the PS2 Crew in this story, Quinty turned Bad but watch out for him in the next story
Tue 04/06/02 at 21:16
Regular
Posts: 23,218
In Episode I the PS2 Crew went in to Rob the highest security bank in the city to get "the rare artefact" when they got there Pro Evo, spike and Triple H held the bank up whilst the rest of the crew went and got the artefact, but when they got there only one thing was there which turned out to be an instruction type thing that told the Crew the place they had to go to find the main artefact. They have to go to the "temple of doom" one problem, where the hell is that?
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Tom picked up the phone and started to dial a number but was suddenly cut off by a loud noise coming down from the other end of the phone, it sounded like some one had pulled the phone line out but it was actually the Crews top new machine...

"So I noticed you got the super secret spy machine working then Resi" Longy said trying to inspect it

It looked like a normal computer but instead of a mouse it had a roller ball that you moved around instead, the computer screen was massive filled a wall

"All ready for testing" Resi smiled impressed at what he had managed to create

"So hows this thing work then" ssxpro ask sounding interesting

Resi pressed a button and moved the roller ball around he pressed a button and it came straight to KR walking down a street some where in the city, he was looking around with his MP5 strapped over his shoulder and he was just casually walking around.

"What’s this prove" Longy butted in before Resi could finish off explaining

"KR raise your right hand in the air if you can hear me" Resi said into a microphone

KR raised his right hand in the air and waved it twice to tell them he got the signal that he had received the message.

"WOW, that is cool" Longy gasped in amazement "how does he get the information?” he added

"Its easy really, he has a tiny ear phone in so he just listens and no one notices the difference.

With that Resi switched off the camera from KR and told the rest of the crew that this was the way that they would find the "temple of doom", Resi scanned the whole of the city but couldn’t find the temple, he gave ssxpro a go on the controls, he follows KR for a while longer and suddenly he turns into an alley way, he came out with a familiar face...
They both got into the same car and headed in the direction of the

"So that’s where KR was really going, he was going to get..." Longy started

"Yeh he was going to get one of my contacts" Tom butted in

"Hopefully he should come back with KR to help us find the Cronies" ssxpro murmured

Tom looked out the main window of the Crews building and stared out of it and looked over the horizon waiting for KR to return with the first of his contacts.

"They have arrived" Tom announced to the rest of the group

The whole group rushed to the window to see who it was, KR stepped out of the black Dodger viper with his MP5 strapped around him he walked straight in to the building. The mystery person left a rocket launcher on his seat and grabbed his Ak-47 and followed KR in side.

"So who is this then" Longy stood up and asked Tom

"This is Badgerman" Tom said proudly "him and I go back a long way"

The group sniggered with Resi laughing uncontrollably until KR stepped in and also said that he had know badgerman for quiet a while as well.

"I will lead you to the temple of Doom" badgerman said confidently

"A couple of years ago we went in there but only just escaped with our life’s didn’t we lads, remember when KR and Longy were in rival groups we set them up in there" Badgerman added

"Oh yeh I remember that" KR said laughing

"Does this mean we need to split into groups again?” Ssxpro asked Longy

The Group sat round deciding what to do.

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!

Suddenly a car bomb exploded out side whilst the rest of the crew were inside, no one was injured from the crew but the bomb set a chain reaction of explosions out side...

"Damn them people just blew up ma car" badgerman whispered

The Crew were powerless to stop anything because their bullets could not hit through the bullet proof glass they were watching out of.

"Its Quazimodo from the Cronies" Resi shouted, he was watching him using his super secret spy machine.

Resi zoomed in closer on noticed that he had nicked Badgermans rocket launcher, Resi looked in horror as he saw Quazimodo turn around with the rocket launcher in his hand and Resi saw how Quazi had the safety cache off so one button press and it was good bye to all the Crew members. Quazi aimed towards the bullet proof Glass where all the crew members were....

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!

A shot rang out from some where and Quazimodo lay dead on the floor with a bullet hole in his head.

"Wow, some dude just saved our life’s" KR said sounding impressed

"Yeh this guy just saved the whole of the PS2 Crew" longy added

"Just because Pro Evo, Triple H and Spike are in jail don’t mean they have left the crew" KR butted back in

"Pro Evo is looking after us" Badgerman laughed "an old friend of his has just saved us"

The whole Crew looked at him but Badgerman would not tell who it was all he would say was that he was an old friend, the crew thought he was hiding some thing but thought they would leave it for a while.

"Anyways" Ssxpro started "We have a lot to get through in the next few days" he added

"Yeh, we have to defeat the Cronies, go to the temple of doom and rescue the Three over members of the crew" Tom added

"Well lets get our priorities in order" Longy ordered

"Yeh lets go and rescue them three first" KR added

"No" longy replied "That is last, first we go to the temple, defeat the cronies and then get them three out of jail" He added

Some of the Crew disagreed but Longy was determined to get people to see his views. The Crew were told by Longy to Follow Badgerman who would lead them to the Temple of Doom.

Badgerman and Tom went in the front car and were followed by a row of Taxi's after Quazimodo blew the Crews cars up. It could have been much worse if it wasn’t for the mystery person with a sniper rifle.

Badgerman had to give instructions to the driver to find the place.

Finally they got to the place and one Crew member from each taxi and strapped a little Bomb on the back tyre, luckily Longy didn’t see or else he would have took them off because kill civilians is bad in his eyes...

"So we finally made it then" Badgerman told the group looking pleased with finding the place

"Right what we are going to do is follow this map and then get out straight after" ssxpro said handing the Map to Longy.

"right" Longy started "KR, Tom and badgerman go and secure the area" he added

KR walked forward with his MP5 strapped around his shoulder, Tom got out his Laser gun and Badgerman pulled up his AK-47 and the three of them walked towards the temple.

"I have a funny feeling, I can feel it in the pit of my stomach" Tom said sounding under confident for the first time in quiet a while

"probably the Indian you had last nigh" KR laughed trying to raise Toms Spirit

"yeh and don’t worry, we have never had a casualty in our team have we KR" Badgerman added

Longy and the rest of the Crew kept their distance as they watched the three guys crept closer to the temple, the temple itself was pretty small but his wasn't their main objective, the main objective was to kill all of the Cronies.

Suddenly Adrian came out the temple door with a Grenade in his hand, he pulled the pin out through it straight at KR, Tom and badgerman...

A hail of bullets rained in on Adrian’s body from the three guys bullets, the rest of the crew ran for cover, the grenade was still flying through the air....

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The grenade exploded in mid air a few feet infront of KR and Tom, Badgerman had quickly ran in the opposite direction to thank the other members of the Crew who had hid but still shot the grenade to pieces.

"Cheers who ever shot the grenade" Badgerman shouted even though he was standing near them

"What?" Longy asked "We didn’t shoot no grenade, the shot came from behind us" he added

"It was him again" Badgerman said was a massive grin on his face

The whole of the crew had now made themselves an easier job, there was only about 7 Cronie members left to kill before making the city peaceful again (or was that what they wanted the people to believe).

All 6 members of the PS2 Crew walked cautiously into the temple wondering what they would find inside...

Inside was one room with a big black box on a table in the middle of a table...

SUDDENLY the box sprang open revealing 11 items...

"But wait, there is only 7 of us here but there is 11 items" Longy said aloud

"obviously we have the three in prison" KR stated the obvious

"So that leaves us with one" badgerman wondered about his old friend

KR walked over to the Box and picked up what looked like a handle
*Press here* it said underneath it

KR pressed the button and out shot a lime Green beam of light he had got a light sabre, the rest of the crew rushed over to get what they could get, KR quickly picked up a Blitz ball and Saved it for when Pro Evo would return...

The Crew walked out of the temple feeling much better and they were ready to face the Cronies...

"So lets go back to base" ssxpro told the group

They walked back to base seeing as it was only round the corner.

Longy sat playing with his Blue light sabre and challenging KR to duels.

The crew still had Shadow,Asher,Natbuc,Liquid,RM18 and CDouch to kill, so they went off in search off them...

The crew walked around the city for a good 30 mins and amazingly they walked past a sign...

*open day TODAY 2:30*

"well its just gone 2:30" Resi told Longy

"Lets go to it then" KR told the rest of the group

The 7 members of the crew walked towards the open day field and for some reason just knew that the cronies would be there, The PS2 Crew were ready for the final showdown with the Sony Cronies... Badgerman was the first to spot them sitting near the exit way looking nervous..

"waiting for us" Badgerman shouted

"There goes our surprise attack" Tom grinned

All 7 members of the cronies faced off against the 7 members of the PS2 Crew, they all stood face to face, Suddenly CDouch pulled out an Uzi and started to fire, Resi fell to the ground with three bullet holes in his leg. Within 5 seconds CDouch was dead, once again a cronie member had a bullet in his head from the mystery person but this time KR had also shot him aswell. This time the mystery person didn't hide for long, he jumped down from a near by tree and took off his mask...

"Hows You doing Neo" KR laughed

"yeh nice shot Neo" Badgerman patted him on the back

"ENOUGH OF THE CELEBRATIONS" Asher shouted

He smiled an evil smile and from behind him came a horde of people all wearing Red shirts...

"Newbies" Longy muttered "they come to our city and then mess the place up" he added

Suddenly 7 people from behind the PS2 Crew put their hands on the back of the crew.

"We are the ready Asher" One of them said

"great" Asher smiled "now lets take four of these and hold them hostage he added"

"Right" Another stated solemnly

The 7 people let Longy, ssxpro and Resi go but held KR, Neo, Badgerman and Tom hostage.

"Remember us" One of them said "We were destroyed by you four" he added

"But now THE NINTENDO ELITES ARE BACK" Sibs (the leader) shouted

Asher and Sibs shook hands as the four crew members were led away, what they needed now was help from some one...

Suddenly another old face turned up...

"Quinty you will help us wont you" Tom asked

Quinty looked at all four members and then turned the other way, his last words to the four of them were "you will die soon"

Tom, KR, Badgerman and Neo were led away but surprisingly they still had their guns on them, what they needed now was help but who could save them now?.....

KR.

Episode III should be up soon.

Welcome to Neo who joined the PS2 Crew in this story, Quinty turned Bad but watch out for him in the next story
Wed 05/06/02 at 21:20
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Aww, I hope this one messes up too. Now that *would* be funny.
Wed 05/06/02 at 21:22
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shut up you face :D

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