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Wonderous. I don't always find your pieces so enjoyable Mr Glove, their non-direction bothers me somewhat (I'm a boring person who likes starts middles and ends).. but with this I enjoyed it, very much. Any story that involves bosoms will always catch my eye.
Gold star.
Gold star.
Freaky, and surreal. But never so far that it's not enjoyable. Nice images - well, other than four orgasms from a 59 year old man - I didn't want that in my head thank you very much.
They say a writer puts something of themselves in to every story.
I say the men in white coats are coming for you!
Great er...non-story!
I say the men in white coats are coming for you!
Great er...non-story!
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