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The beast is from the ground.
Switch your eye away.
I said switch your eye away.
Its what you need this medicine is keane.
Its always been from heam.
That you have never gone,I always sing your song.
Listen through your ears gone from inside deers.
Slit from the throat.
He watched her walk away.
Blue,green how was I mean.
Go, go with me.
We can always switch.
Switch,break gone day.
Make this please now.
Its what I need.
> Stick to story writing.
>
> Absolutely dire.
Yeah I will from now on my poem writing can't be the greatest.
There was literally no redeeming features, apart from the fact that it seemed to be about a beast, which was an interesting concept.
The strangest bit was:
"Its what you need this medicine is keane.
Its always been from heam."
Eh?
> Scream half of it, put some 'BRRRZZZZ-silence-BRRZZZZZ'guitar
> distortion in, and have a semi punky beat and voila, nu-metal!
More like 'Nu-Mental' in Crossbob's case =)
> Stick to story writing.
>
> Absolutely dire.
I would have to agree.