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Today I felt terrible I woke thinking my wife would be laying, beside me and I would be able to put my arm round her. But no I couldn’t it was just lonely me I got up, and walked to the shower. I washed myself nice and clean, so I didn’t smell then I got dressed, in some nice clothes. Even though no one would really care I was wearing nice clothes. I went out the house and walked down the street, I walked along looking down at the floor, feeling sorry for myself.
Like I normally do every single day; every single second, minute, hour. I feel sorry for myself and I have never stopped. I have been acting like this since my wife went; we had been together for 10 years. She stopped it to go off with some other man, so now I hate her. I walk down the road kick some rubbish along. I walk into the café I go into every morning, to have my breakfast. I go in and ask for the usual bacon, egg, sausages and a nice warm cup of tea.
I shove it down me then walk out, I walk down to work I work in a little tiny office, where there’s no air conditioning and it’s boiling. Well the things to do today, walk up loads of stairs to my office because the lifts broken, then turn on my computer and wait for five damn minutes for it to load, then sit down and type up a load of horrible work. So I walk into the office no one greeting me I go and sit down, turn on the computer and wait for it to load. I go and open a window, when I look back round a woman is walking into the office. A woman I had never seen before with long blonde straight beautiful hair, her face so nice her eyes look glazed she was beautiful and I wanted her.
I went over to Mike “Who’s that woman” I asked. “What that one” He answered. “No the other Woman there” I answered “O she’s Sal” he told me. “Oh she’s beautiful. I didn’t need anybody anymore I had found the perfect person and she was great.
Like I normally do every single day; every single second, minute, hour. I feel sorry for myself and I have never stopped. I have been acting like this since my wife went; we had been together for 10 years. She stopped it to go off with some other man, so now I hate her. I walk down the road kick some rubbish along. I walk into the café I go into every morning, to have my breakfast. I go in and ask for the usual bacon, egg, sausages and a nice warm cup of tea.
I shove it down me then walk out, I walk down to work I work in a little tiny office, where there’s no air conditioning and it’s boiling. Well the things to do today, walk up loads of stairs to my office because the lifts broken, then turn on my computer and wait for five damn minutes for it to load, then sit down and type up a load of horrible work. So I walk into the office no one greeting me I go and sit down, turn on the computer and wait for it to load. I go and open a window, when I look back round a woman is walking into the office. A woman I had never seen before with long blonde straight beautiful hair, her face so nice her eyes look glazed she was beautiful and I wanted her.
I went over to Mike “Who’s that woman” I asked. “What that one” He answered. “No the other Woman there” I answered “O she’s Sal” he told me. “Oh she’s beautiful. I didn’t need anybody anymore I had found the perfect person and she was great.
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He's going to work.
Why would you put on some nice clothes if you're you're just gonna go down the cafe and shove your breakfast down them?
Im 14 go to school and trying to improve.
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> How am I asking for it?
By:
Double Posting (or 5-6 times)
Quoting extremely long messages and adding a random line (generally stupid and often rather irrelivant)
Posting such silly stories. OK, you're what? 12? 13? Do you go to school?
> How am I asking for it?
By:
Double Posting (or 5-6 times)
Quoting extremely long messages and adding a random line (generally stupid and often rather irrelivant)
Posting such silly stories. OK, you're what? 12? 13? Do you go to school?
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> That song was alright but to much guitar and noise no singing.
...
It was random noise and feedback
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> That song was alright but to much guitar and noise no singing.
...
It was random noise and feedback
.............
How am I asking for it?
Marinky_Kongshi wrote:
> Just because more people believe something is good or bad, it doesn't
> mean it actually is- for example: many people think that the PS2 is
> better than the Gamecube, but it isn't really better. The majority of
> people just like it better(I'm not saying the Gamecube is better, just
> that they equally have they're own pros and cons).
Oh my.
> If someone did
> get murdered, then 1. the murderer wouldn't think of it as bad and 2.
> the victom(s) wouldn't think of it as bad as they would be dead anyway
> 3. however, they would be in a much better place, which wouldn't be
> 'bad' at all. Don't you think?
So what? It's OK to murder people as long as you think it's right?
You've got to be joking.
> Certain actions are greater than others - correct?
> Certain actions and more good, or more bad, than others.
>
> Again, only by opinion. Not by everyone.
I think that in certain things, everyone can agree that it is better than others. Do you think what Hitler did during WW2 is thought of as good by anyone? Killing 6 million innocent people? I think not...
> Disliking something is just not liking something. Insulting something
> is purpousely trying to offend someone or their work.
It's also a progresion of dislike. Crossbob is simply annoying people at this point - purposefuly. So sure, he should get insulted - he's asking for it.
> I thought you kept talking about how murdering is bad, and you have
> to be pretty smart to create such things as atomic bombs. Also,
> someone could be the smartest person in the world and still not be a
> 'better person'. People are only as 'good' as their personality(which
> more often than not, can't be improved that easily).
Yes, but Atomic bombs were not designed to be used, they were designed as theoretical devices - not to be used. But then again, let them fall into the hands of people uneducated in the field of the effects of the Atomic bomb and we get another Hiroshima. It wasn't the creating of the bomb that killed people, it was the people that used it.
Being knowledgable is not the same as being smart. To know and recognise right and wrong is something that can be taught, and once you realize that you wouldn't murder someone - it is rare that murder is commited by anyone who actually has any control over their actions.
And why can't personalities be improved "that easily"? Surely, if you realize that you do something which aggrevates others you can adapt to that and stop doing it?
> Haven't you ever heard the saying "Nobody's perfect"? I
> said it on here before, but in theory everyone is perfect.
What? You just contradicted yourself so badly...
> Just because more people believe something is good or bad, it doesn't
> mean it actually is- for example: many people think that the PS2 is
> better than the Gamecube, but it isn't really better. The majority of
> people just like it better(I'm not saying the Gamecube is better, just
> that they equally have they're own pros and cons).
Oh my.
> If someone did
> get murdered, then 1. the murderer wouldn't think of it as bad and 2.
> the victom(s) wouldn't think of it as bad as they would be dead anyway
> 3. however, they would be in a much better place, which wouldn't be
> 'bad' at all. Don't you think?
So what? It's OK to murder people as long as you think it's right?
You've got to be joking.
> Certain actions are greater than others - correct?
> Certain actions and more good, or more bad, than others.
>
> Again, only by opinion. Not by everyone.
I think that in certain things, everyone can agree that it is better than others. Do you think what Hitler did during WW2 is thought of as good by anyone? Killing 6 million innocent people? I think not...
> Disliking something is just not liking something. Insulting something
> is purpousely trying to offend someone or their work.
It's also a progresion of dislike. Crossbob is simply annoying people at this point - purposefuly. So sure, he should get insulted - he's asking for it.
> I thought you kept talking about how murdering is bad, and you have
> to be pretty smart to create such things as atomic bombs. Also,
> someone could be the smartest person in the world and still not be a
> 'better person'. People are only as 'good' as their personality(which
> more often than not, can't be improved that easily).
Yes, but Atomic bombs were not designed to be used, they were designed as theoretical devices - not to be used. But then again, let them fall into the hands of people uneducated in the field of the effects of the Atomic bomb and we get another Hiroshima. It wasn't the creating of the bomb that killed people, it was the people that used it.
Being knowledgable is not the same as being smart. To know and recognise right and wrong is something that can be taught, and once you realize that you wouldn't murder someone - it is rare that murder is commited by anyone who actually has any control over their actions.
And why can't personalities be improved "that easily"? Surely, if you realize that you do something which aggrevates others you can adapt to that and stop doing it?
> Haven't you ever heard the saying "Nobody's perfect"? I
> said it on here before, but in theory everyone is perfect.
What? You just contradicted yourself so badly...
Whoops sorry must of clicked it twice.
It's bad enough that you repliad quoting his message but you had to go and double post as well didn't you?
Memorandum! wrote:
> Right. There's no good or bad.
> That's what you're saying? It's all opinion.
>
> Okay.
> Ever heard Moonlight Sonata? Good tune, I think you'll agree.
> However, since there is no good or bad, the song I've just written
> especially for you is just as 'good'.
> [URL]http://s10.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36OP24HFB26HN1N1HJKQOETNZJ[/URL]
> to listen to it.
>
> Mine is just as full of emotion, is just as well composed.
> The structure, despite actually being non-existent is just as good as
> the intricate planning that went into composing Moonlight Sonata. If
> I believe these things are true, then I am right, because it's my
> opinion! That is a good song! Because it's my opinion!
>
> Let's go on with this whole "there's no good and bad"
> thing, we'll look at the current tennis frenzy.
>
> I don't play tennis. However, it is my opinion that I am the best
> tennis player in the world. I am better than Roger Federer. In
> fact, in my opinion he's useless. Who cares about the facts and
> objectivity? He's crap!
>
> I'm good at tennis. I don't play it, but I'm good. If I believe
> that, it has to be true, to me, because it's my opinion! And as long
> as it's correct to me no-one can say I'm wrong, right?
>
> Wrong. What I think doesn't matter.
> I could believe that I wrote the world's best ever song just now, and
> that I'm a better tennis player than Federer, but guess what? I'd be
> wrong!
>
> Taking that example further again, if there's no good and bad, how do
> people win sporting tournaments? After all, they're all of exact
> equal ability, because good and bad don't exist, yet somehow, there
> is always a winner and a loser, perhaps because the winner...played
> better? Wait! That can't be right! That would mean someone was more
> 'good' or less 'bad'...
>
> Someone can have an opinion that something is good, yes, and you're
> right about that, but just because someone believes something it
> doesn't suddenly become true.
>
> I'm the smartest person to ever live, the most talented at sports,
> the best musician, and just a general all round awesome guy.
>
> I could beat the world record for sprinting easily. In my opinion I
> could run the 100m in 3 seconds. It's my opinion, so it can't be
> wrong! I really am 3 times faster than the fastest sprinters. In my
> opinion I am more talented, so nobody can dispute it. Even though
> there is overwhelming evidence to the contrary, because I believe it,
> it has to be true and nobody can dispute it.
>
> [URL]http://img196.exs.cx/img196/2691/pwnedtealc9qg.jpg[/URL]
That song was alright but to much guitar and noise no singing.
> Right. There's no good or bad.
> That's what you're saying? It's all opinion.
>
> Okay.
> Ever heard Moonlight Sonata? Good tune, I think you'll agree.
> However, since there is no good or bad, the song I've just written
> especially for you is just as 'good'.
> [URL]http://s10.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36OP24HFB26HN1N1HJKQOETNZJ[/URL]
> to listen to it.
>
> Mine is just as full of emotion, is just as well composed.
> The structure, despite actually being non-existent is just as good as
> the intricate planning that went into composing Moonlight Sonata. If
> I believe these things are true, then I am right, because it's my
> opinion! That is a good song! Because it's my opinion!
>
> Let's go on with this whole "there's no good and bad"
> thing, we'll look at the current tennis frenzy.
>
> I don't play tennis. However, it is my opinion that I am the best
> tennis player in the world. I am better than Roger Federer. In
> fact, in my opinion he's useless. Who cares about the facts and
> objectivity? He's crap!
>
> I'm good at tennis. I don't play it, but I'm good. If I believe
> that, it has to be true, to me, because it's my opinion! And as long
> as it's correct to me no-one can say I'm wrong, right?
>
> Wrong. What I think doesn't matter.
> I could believe that I wrote the world's best ever song just now, and
> that I'm a better tennis player than Federer, but guess what? I'd be
> wrong!
>
> Taking that example further again, if there's no good and bad, how do
> people win sporting tournaments? After all, they're all of exact
> equal ability, because good and bad don't exist, yet somehow, there
> is always a winner and a loser, perhaps because the winner...played
> better? Wait! That can't be right! That would mean someone was more
> 'good' or less 'bad'...
>
> Someone can have an opinion that something is good, yes, and you're
> right about that, but just because someone believes something it
> doesn't suddenly become true.
>
> I'm the smartest person to ever live, the most talented at sports,
> the best musician, and just a general all round awesome guy.
>
> I could beat the world record for sprinting easily. In my opinion I
> could run the 100m in 3 seconds. It's my opinion, so it can't be
> wrong! I really am 3 times faster than the fastest sprinters. In my
> opinion I am more talented, so nobody can dispute it. Even though
> there is overwhelming evidence to the contrary, because I believe it,
> it has to be true and nobody can dispute it.
>
> [URL]http://img196.exs.cx/img196/2691/pwnedtealc9qg.jpg[/URL]
That song was alright but to much guitar and noise no singing.
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