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"SSC27: Who is she?"

As I was on one of my daily walks on the sidewalk, I noticed a girl walk by that caught my eye. She was gorgeous! From her bobbly bits to her butt. I finished my salted fish. Oh, her beauty... so splendid! She was watching a bunch of parachuters and my mates were riding down roads in shopping carts. I noticed a lit candle on the ground, so I blew it out. All of the sudden, there was a wild earthquake!

A stampede of raging bulls were headed towards the girl. So I leaped to her rescue. I beat them with my super karate skills. Although, I think they gave my love a rash. She was scratching and everything. So I simply rubbed the rash with a cotton pillow. She held my hand, and walked away.

My mates got sucked into a sand pit. I dived in and saved them, but then some giant sand beast chased me. I escaped in the end, losing a shoe. Afterwards, me and my mates went bowling. I went unicycling and spray painted hearts for her on a wall to impress her. But she didn't notice any of it, she was drowning! I went to rescue her, but she wouldn't wake up. I was getting worried. I tried everything...

A few minutes later I thought maybe I could suck the water out of her. So I gave her mouth-to-mouth. When she finally got up, she rapped her arms around me and...

Darkness. Everything was surrounded in darkness. All I could see was darkness. I was so close too! So close to winning her heart. "Oh well," I said to myself, "time to recharge my DS."

FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> Ah, I see. Another game story.

I only made two...

Is that suppose to be a positive thing or a negative thing?

Ah, I see. Another game story.

Black Glove wrote:
> On the downside: it read a bit like a list.
> On the upside: some peculiar imagery.

Don't worry- I've just prepared a multi-part story that'll blow your mind, which I hope to use in the next short story competition(a part per SSC, to build some tension).

Black Glove wrote:
> Marinky_Kongshi wrote:
> I don't know. Probably, why'd you ask?
>
> I was only joking.

You were? Oh, that's ok then.

Damn, I thought it was ture.

Marinky_Kongshi wrote:
> I don't know. Probably, why'd you ask?

I was only joking.
On the downside: it read a bit like a list.
On the upside: some peculiar imagery.

Black Glove wrote:
> Art thee a disciple of the Crossbob?

If they are, they've got a long way to go. Did you notice all that punctuation in the right place?...

Black Glove wrote:
> Art thee a disciple of the Crossbob?

I don't know. Probably, why'd you ask?

Art thee a disciple of the Crossbob?

Paradox: wrote:
> :-)

:o!

I know, it's a bit simple to say the least. Better than nothing I suppose. Unless I could change it... :)

:-)