When I suggested that you write your own reviews I meant put a bit of detail into them. Try and view some of our other posters reviews such as Sonic Chris' or Ghost Killers (there are many others but....) and you will see what we mean.

If you wish to be in with a chance of winning a free game you need to submit quality like theirs. Try bulking up this review with your actual feelings, put detail in and write as much quality as you can. If you want just copy the layout of other users but change the words to your feelings. This will help with your structure.