Well done for trying, but if it's a game award you're after, you need to put more in. As pb said, try thinking of the review in sections of basic game elements (graphics, sounds, gameplay, controls to name a few). Once you've got them sections, it's a test of linking them together in some way to keep somebody reading. Keep it interesting and flowing.

At least it's your own review, which is also important. Try abit harder, and who knows, with a great review, you may be rewarded for your efforts ;)

This game had awesome grphics and good special effects.  It starts out easy then allows you to learn as you go as it also gets more challenging.  Very fun game that keeps you wanting to move on and on to each and every level.  Good game for most any age and full of plenty of special features just for fun.