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hi look at my rap hope i win plz There are 9 replies
Original Message posted by t.bits on 27/04/2008 at 5:22:45PM
umm dont no what to right
when i think above my head there is no light
when i look in the mirror i see a fright
the devils temtatin me to a fight
you may not beleive me but i know that im right
you can still see stuff even without sight
i see stuff to the left and stuff to the right
i can fly higher higher than any kite
im a just 12 year old gangsta boy who made this up on the spot

IF U ARE READING TO KIDS DO NOT LET THEM SEE THIS

i live in brixton so i grow up  stong
my dad smoke weed and my mum has a thong
my dad love his weed and a bit on bong
i dont know where he get this from maybe hong kong
we all have anger problems espiccily me
my little bro swears and hes not even 3
he wakes me up in the night so i dont do good at school
since hes been born ive been actin a fool
im not a poet im just a lyrical guy
makin movements and and so thers is no need to cry
see i made this up with out even thinkin
i just kept typin and my brother kept drinkin
i go to a school with loads of rats
in the lunch hall and wraped around the taps

well im over and out for now hope i win the prize lool plz
holla bk if ya think im good
 
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Marink
"What's basketball?"
on 26/06/2008 at 6:02:41PM
Total Posts: 159
It's funny
You say that kids shouldn't read your song
Yet you're a child yourself, so you are also in the wrong
If you really want to win something
Then I hope that you are listening
Don't ask for it in your rap
Dat's wack, you know? BRAP BRAP!
Maybe you understood that, maybe you did not
But you will not get anything by trying to be a hotshot
Anyway, time to wrap up this thing
And now I must go take off my bling
As it is time to give somebody else a chance to sing.

WORD!
 
magic pixie
"wassup"
on 21/06/2008 at 9:00:39AM
Edited: 21/6/08 9:16
Total Posts: 3
Ladybird wrote:
> Um..  I don't know what to right, I mean write either..
> But, I thought I'd say something anyways just for the heck of
> it.
>
> Are your parents really that dysfunctional?  Just wondering..

How rude of you to call this kid"s parents dysfunctional.
      Wearing a thong or smoking weed does not make for being
  dysfunctional. I think it is more your "class/ type" that is dysfunctional in a social sense.

   Listen to 50 Cent or Eminem to get an idea of what is really going on.... Please don"t take undue offence as none was intendo
                         Magic Pixie o.g.
 
magic pixie
"wassup"
on 20/06/2008 at 7:38:08PM
Edited: 21/6/08 9:13
Total Posts: 3
I absolutely adored it . It was like real "sick" guy ya know what am sayen innit.?..Well Bad !!!   (Shakespeare don"t  even come close) I once lived in Tulse Hill, Brixton in 85 and got no probs ...... REE- SPECT going out to you BRO !!  WRITE ON....
                      Magic Pixie o.g.

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phuzzy
"hats. for. clowns."
on 18/06/2008 at 12:08:23PM
Total Posts: 110
He HAS to win.
 
Dragonlance
"SilverSurfer"
on 25/05/2008 at 8:09:58PM
Total Posts: 698
R you all bein scamed?
 
The Reaper
"Mahn'gah!"
on 25/05/2008 at 7:32:00PM
Total Posts: 3871
I don't think you can be 12 and a "gangsta"
 
pete_21
"cant think of a tag"
on 21/05/2008 at 5:20:55PM
Total Posts: 479
Eye ope dey doynte deeduct poyntz 4 spelin miztaykes !!!!.
 
hippyman
"That was some chill"
on 18/05/2008 at 8:02:11PM
Total Posts: 1705
t.bits wrote:
> IF U ARE READING TO KIDS DO NOT LET THEM SEE THIS

Don't worry, I don't let anybody see my computer screen.  :p
 
Ladybird
on 16/05/2008 at 9:22:50PM
Total Posts: 858
Um..  I don't know what to right, I mean write either..
But, I thought I'd say something anyways just for the heck of it. 

Are your parents really that dysfunctional?  Just wondering..
 
t.bits
on 27/04/2008 at 5:22:45PM
Total Posts: 1
umm dont no what to right
when i think above my head there is no light
when i look in the mirror i see a fright
the devils temtatin me to a fight
you may not beleive me but i know that im right
you can still see stuff even without sight
i see stuff to the left and stuff to the right
i can fly higher higher than any kite
im a just 12 year old gangsta boy who made this up on the spot

IF U ARE READING TO KIDS DO NOT LET THEM SEE THIS

i live in brixton so i grow up  stong
my dad smoke weed and my mum has a thong
my dad love his weed and a bit on bong
i dont know where he get this from maybe hong kong
we all have anger problems espiccily me
my little bro swears and hes not even 3
he wakes me up in the night so i dont do good at school
since hes been born ive been actin a fool
im not a poet im just a lyrical guy
makin movements and and so thers is no need to cry
see i made this up with out even thinkin
i just kept typin and my brother kept drinkin
i go to a school with loads of rats
in the lunch hall and wraped around the taps

well im over and out for now hope i win the prize lool plz
holla bk if ya think im good
 
 
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