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Wow! Hot! A Cautionary Tale There are 6 replies
Original Message posted by Meka Dragon on 05/02/2008 at 1:57:50PM
**** WARNING THIS STORY CONTAINS MATURE THEMES, AND IF EASILY OFFENDED I SUGGEST READING NO FURTHER ****


Henry glanced out of the window, checked his watch and drew the curtains. Jenny had been gone for fifteen minutes, so he was certain she wouldn’t pop back for anything. He grabbed the man-size tissues from the hall and took them into the computer room. The PC seemed to take an age to boot up, and then his web-browser insisted on downloading security updates before he could get online. He checked his watch, and whilst it had seemed like an age, only minutes had passed. He logged onto his email, hoping there would be something from Jeff. He always shared anything particularly good he’d come across, and amongst the newsletters he never recalled subscribing to and the spam, there it was, titled ‘Wow! Hot!’

‘Check this out mate’ it said, next to a blue hyperlink ‘Candice Diavolo full frontal!’ Henry hovered the cursor over the link, before returning to the living room to glance out of the window again to check it was still clear. He sat down, and clicked on the link, rubbing his hands together as a new window opened, revealing the Candice, standing confidently, revealing all. Henry raised his eyebrows and puffed out his cheeks. He unbuckled his belt, and shifted out of his trousers. He reached a hand down and held himself firmly, feeling himself stiffen. With one hand he started to pump away, touching the screen with the other hand. He licked his lips, and just for a second, he swore the girl on the screen winked at him as he shot his load. He grabbed a tissue and started to clean himself up, reaching out to the mouse with the other hand, and clicking on the little cross. Another box popped up. Great, he thought, pop-ups. He went to close the new window, until he saw in it another picture of Candice. She looked annoyed, her arms folded across her chest.
“You can’t do that, mister,” she said.
Shocked, Henry closed the window. Another popped up.
“So you think you can just use me for your satisfaction, then dump me?” she said, wagging a finger at him.
Henry moved to close the window, put his hand was shaking, couldn’t keep the cursor still over the cross. He stopped to think. This was a typical Jeff practical joke, sending a link like this, with a sting in the tail. He laughed, and calmly closed the window. He finished cleaning himself up, and disposed of the soiled tissues.
As he sat down again to switch off his PC, he noticed something different. Candice Diavolo was on his desktop background, standing of the tropical island, wearing only a hula skirt.
“You used me Henry. Aren’t you even going to apologise?”
Henry stood gob-smacked. “Sorry?” he said, looking over his shoulder, hoping someone was watching him, ready to jump out and laugh.
“That’s a start,” said Candice, with the start of a smile beginning to form on her face.
Henry smiled to, as he guided the cursor over to the start button. He pushed it, hit shutdown.
Candice appeared much bigger on the screen.
“I don’t think so, Mister,” she said, and swatted away the icons. “Don’t you want to play with these?” she held her breasts up closer, jiggling them up and down.
“Stop that!” said Henry, “my girlfriend will be back soon.”
“Girlfriend? You never mentioned a girlfriend when you were playing with me earlier?”
“Look, I’m sorry about that. Now will you please go?”
Candice started to groan, “Oh Henry, you’re so big. Give it to me Henry.”
“Stop,” cried Henry as he reached for the speakers. He turned them all the way down, but still Candice kept groaning.
“Worried your little girlfriend might hear me?” she said with a smile.
Henry tore the speakers out the back of the computer, but still she kept groaning.
Henry looked at his watch, Jenny would be back at any moment. As she groaned ever louder Henry grabbed at the cable and yanked it out of the socket. The screen went black, and finally there was silence, right up until the doorbell rang.
Just in time thought Henry, and opened the door, expecting to see Jenny with a bag of shopping, but there stood Candice, completely naked.
“No!” cried Henry, and he pushed the door closed. He turned away, put as he heard Candice start to groan loudly he turned back again, opening the door, “Stop! Come in, quick, before someone sees you out there.”
He pulled her by the arm. Never had he felt skin so soft.
“This is impossible!” said Henry, running his shaking hands through his hair. “Let me get you some clothes, Jenny will be back any second!”
“I don’t want clothes, Henry, I want you,” she slowly ran her tongue around her lips and arched her back. Henry felt himself getting hard.
“No. I’ll give you money, anything, just please, get out.”
“You want me to go?” she said sadly, whilst twiddling a nipple between two fingers.
“Yes, please,” implored Henry.
She ran her hands up her legs to her crotch, and looked at the growing bulge in his pants, “Then give it to me, Henry.”
Henry’s lip trembled as he took slow steps towards her. He reached out and placed his hands on her hips, running them up, towards her breasts. She reached down and slipped off his underpants.
“That’s what I want,” she said, placing one hand around his member.  With a spasm, Henry felt all life ejecting from his body, as Candice tore it away from him. 
With Henry collapsed, lifeless on the floor Candice made her way into the computer room. She plugged the PC back in and booted it up, and logged into Henry’s email. She found a copy of Jeff’s email, and forwarded it on to all of Henry’s male contacts, before clicking on the link herself. As her face appeared on the screen she disappeared, just as as the front door was opened, and Jenny screamed.
 
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the devil him self
"There is onlyONE!!!"
on 06/02/2008 at 10:07:12PM
Total Posts: 43
very good story it was a good read  hope you post some more
 
Hedfix
"8==="
on 06/02/2008 at 2:52:44PM
Total Posts: 3563
Not bad. 2000AD did it better with their "rape victim re-incarnated as prison sex machine scif-fi uber-revenge story"

;)
 
Alfonse
"Icecold Hotpants"
on 06/02/2008 at 2:04:59PM
Total Posts: 5919
I wouldn't mind if I died like that.
 
Your Honour
on 06/02/2008 at 2:01:57PM
Total Posts: 528
Very good.
 
Chaos
"Mahn'gah!"
on 06/02/2008 at 1:08:34AM
Edited: 6/2/08 1:09
Total Posts: 3985
Good story, though I would've thought that the guy would've been much more shocked than he actually was.

On the scale of appropriateness, I would suggest you flag this post to show that it has some more mature content, this is, after all, a website that can be accessed by anyone, and we don't want angry mums or displeased customers for Freeola :)
 
pb
"Work makes me tired"
on 06/02/2008 at 12:13:46AM
Total Posts: 7273
Very good, the ultimate guilty pleasure, heh.

Reminds me of a modern version of Lilith, the demoness from Kabbalah, the Dead Sea Scrolls and other sources.
 
Meka Dragon
"not dead"
on 05/02/2008 at 1:57:50PM
Edited: 6/2/08 8:59
Total Posts: 131
**** WARNING THIS STORY CONTAINS MATURE THEMES, AND IF EASILY OFFENDED I SUGGEST READING NO FURTHER ****


Henry glanced out of the window, checked his watch and drew the curtains. Jenny had been gone for fifteen minutes, so he was certain she wouldn’t pop back for anything. He grabbed the man-size tissues from the hall and took them into the computer room. The PC seemed to take an age to boot up, and then his web-browser insisted on downloading security updates before he could get online. He checked his watch, and whilst it had seemed like an age, only minutes had passed. He logged onto his email, hoping there would be something from Jeff. He always shared anything particularly good he’d come across, and amongst the newsletters he never recalled subscribing to and the spam, there it was, titled ‘Wow! Hot!’

‘Check this out mate’ it said, next to a blue hyperlink ‘Candice Diavolo full frontal!’ Henry hovered the cursor over the link, before returning to the living room to glance out of the window again to check it was still clear. He sat down, and clicked on the link, rubbing his hands together as a new window opened, revealing the Candice, standing confidently, revealing all. Henry raised his eyebrows and puffed out his cheeks. He unbuckled his belt, and shifted out of his trousers. He reached a hand down and held himself firmly, feeling himself stiffen. With one hand he started to pump away, touching the screen with the other hand. He licked his lips, and just for a second, he swore the girl on the screen winked at him as he shot his load. He grabbed a tissue and started to clean himself up, reaching out to the mouse with the other hand, and clicking on the little cross. Another box popped up. Great, he thought, pop-ups. He went to close the new window, until he saw in it another picture of Candice. She looked annoyed, her arms folded across her chest.
“You can’t do that, mister,” she said.
Shocked, Henry closed the window. Another popped up.
“So you think you can just use me for your satisfaction, then dump me?” she said, wagging a finger at him.
Henry moved to close the window, put his hand was shaking, couldn’t keep the cursor still over the cross. He stopped to think. This was a typical Jeff practical joke, sending a link like this, with a sting in the tail. He laughed, and calmly closed the window. He finished cleaning himself up, and disposed of the soiled tissues.
As he sat down again to switch off his PC, he noticed something different. Candice Diavolo was on his desktop background, standing of the tropical island, wearing only a hula skirt.
“You used me Henry. Aren’t you even going to apologise?”
Henry stood gob-smacked. “Sorry?” he said, looking over his shoulder, hoping someone was watching him, ready to jump out and laugh.
“That’s a start,” said Candice, with the start of a smile beginning to form on her face.
Henry smiled to, as he guided the cursor over to the start button. He pushed it, hit shutdown.
Candice appeared much bigger on the screen.
“I don’t think so, Mister,” she said, and swatted away the icons. “Don’t you want to play with these?” she held her breasts up closer, jiggling them up and down.
“Stop that!” said Henry, “my girlfriend will be back soon.”
“Girlfriend? You never mentioned a girlfriend when you were playing with me earlier?”
“Look, I’m sorry about that. Now will you please go?”
Candice started to groan, “Oh Henry, you’re so big. Give it to me Henry.”
“Stop,” cried Henry as he reached for the speakers. He turned them all the way down, but still Candice kept groaning.
“Worried your little girlfriend might hear me?” she said with a smile.
Henry tore the speakers out the back of the computer, but still she kept groaning.
Henry looked at his watch, Jenny would be back at any moment. As she groaned ever louder Henry grabbed at the cable and yanked it out of the socket. The screen went black, and finally there was silence, right up until the doorbell rang.
Just in time thought Henry, and opened the door, expecting to see Jenny with a bag of shopping, but there stood Candice, completely naked.
“No!” cried Henry, and he pushed the door closed. He turned away, put as he heard Candice start to groan loudly he turned back again, opening the door, “Stop! Come in, quick, before someone sees you out there.”
He pulled her by the arm. Never had he felt skin so soft.
“This is impossible!” said Henry, running his shaking hands through his hair. “Let me get you some clothes, Jenny will be back any second!”
“I don’t want clothes, Henry, I want you,” she slowly ran her tongue around her lips and arched her back. Henry felt himself getting hard.
“No. I’ll give you money, anything, just please, get out.”
“You want me to go?” she said sadly, whilst twiddling a nipple between two fingers.
“Yes, please,” implored Henry.
She ran her hands up her legs to her crotch, and looked at the growing bulge in his pants, “Then give it to me, Henry.”
Henry’s lip trembled as he took slow steps towards her. He reached out and placed his hands on her hips, running them up, towards her breasts. She reached down and slipped off his underpants.
“That’s what I want,” she said, placing one hand around his member.  With a spasm, Henry felt all life ejecting from his body, as Candice tore it away from him. 
With Henry collapsed, lifeless on the floor Candice made her way into the computer room. She plugged the PC back in and booted it up, and logged into Henry’s email. She found a copy of Jeff’s email, and forwarded it on to all of Henry’s male contacts, before clicking on the link herself. As her face appeared on the screen she disappeared, just as as the front door was opened, and Jenny screamed.
 
 
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